Re: Thread 91/91 FINAL
anonymous
July 23 2012, 14:14:17 UTC
I gotta say, if only half the Persona fanfics I've read were as good as this one, I don't think I'd ever leave my computer (not like I do anyway, lol).
Just one thing, though. If you do publish this anywhere, or even just with this original posting, it would be great if you at least mentioned SOMETHING about involving the police, considering that they have an ace detective as a classmate and another one (when he's sober, anyway) as Souji's father. I know it would probably not work well in the context of this story, but maybe just make it a disclaimer or something... The reason I say this is because too many kids (and, yes, I mean KIDS) get stuck in almost this exact situation, and it wouldn't do to send the message that the thing to do in that situation is ANYTHING but calling the police immediately. It's easy for a kid to convince themselves that the police will just dismiss it because it's just a kid reporting it, and that may have been true many years ago, but it certainly is not now.
And, yes, I know that anyone under 18 (not that sexual assault is any better if you're an adult) shouldn't be reading this fic anyway, but we all know how well that theory works in the real world.
Re: Thread 91/91 FINAL
anonymous
July 23 2012, 22:57:17 UTC
i think youre right about kids *irl* should be telling the cops BUTTTTT i think it would have been really ooc for yosuke to do that?? not only bc dojima is the police in inaba which would have been super awk for him but also that these kids beat a goddess man they probably think they can handle shit on their own.
and i would think kids would know fic is not rl.
just my two cents ahhaa.....sorry if i offended anon or author anon
Just one thing, though. If you do publish this anywhere, or even just with this original posting, it would be great if you at least mentioned SOMETHING about involving the police, considering that they have an ace detective as a classmate and another one (when he's sober, anyway) as Souji's father. I know it would probably not work well in the context of this story, but maybe just make it a disclaimer or something... The reason I say this is because too many kids (and, yes, I mean KIDS) get stuck in almost this exact situation, and it wouldn't do to send the message that the thing to do in that situation is ANYTHING but calling the police immediately. It's easy for a kid to convince themselves that the police will just dismiss it because it's just a kid reporting it, and that may have been true many years ago, but it certainly is not now.
And, yes, I know that anyone under 18 (not that sexual assault is any better if you're an adult) shouldn't be reading this fic anyway, but we all know how well that theory works in the real world.
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and i would think kids would know fic is not rl.
just my two cents ahhaa.....sorry if i offended anon or author anon
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