I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40b/40)
anonymous
April 23 2012, 00:20:20 UTC
ho_down37777 2012-12-25 5:22 AM (link)
Hehehe, you always sound whiny, but that's why we heart you. (Just teasing!) Have fun with "Internet BF." And if you can't get those leather pants off, you could always keep them on, and take some pics for your fans….just sayin'….
DAT ASS! ::trollface::
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blancmange_party 2012-12-25 5:23 AM (link)
HAPPY XMAS/NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!! (I'm getting your album for Xmas, and you were also just on the radio, LOL.)
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carpal_bong 2012-12-25 5:25 AM (link)
gdi, i never get first comment any moar. remember when it used to be just me replyin 2 most of ur entries? i was the original hana fan. don't forget it. lol neway, glad its still workin out with u guys. i was like "no wai" when u first got back with him, but i guess u knew wat u were doin. gl gettin out of your pants.
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snibblefnoo 2012-12-25 5:25 AM (link)
u suck
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snibblefnoo 2012-12-25 5:25 AM (link)
and t.m. revolution sucks too
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snibblefnoo 2012-12-25 5:26 AM (link)
you should suck each others dicks
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harbl_boat 2012-12-25 5:26 AM (link)
I LOVE YOU, HAPPY HOLIDAYS! MY SISTER NAMED HER CAT AFTER YOU, AND BTW, SHE LOVED IT WHEN YOU WORE THAT HELLO KITTY SHIRT! YOU SHOULD WEAR IT AGAIN ON YOUR SUMMER TOUR! SEE YOU THEN (FROM THE AUDIENCE, DOn'T FREAK, I'M NOT A STALKER!!@!!!!!)
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harbl_boat 2012-12-25 5:27 AM (link)
PS DON'T LISTEN TO SNIBBLFLU, HE JUST JELLY CAUSE NOBODY SUCKS HIS DICK!
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mrnorrible 2012-12-25 5:32 AM (link)
Didn't you get my e-mail? I took an earlier train, and am at my uncle's house now, so you've exactly 15 minutes to get out of those pants. ;-)
(Just kidding. I'll give you time to shower and eat, and so forth. But I am here, so call me the second you're ready. Miss you!)
I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
April 23 2012, 00:29:01 UTC
Yosuke's practically nodding off into his soup, by the time Dad's got lunch on the table. But that's fine; that's all right. Dad and Souji are talking, laughing--Dad's telling some story about the tour, the one he always tells, where someone threw a rose on stage, and Yosuke thought it was a mouse, and screamed into the mic.
"It worries me, sometimes," he says. Yosuke's heard this before, too, heard it enough times that he doesn't even roll his eyes. "There are people who like him because he's so vulnerable, because of things like the rose, and his vomiting on the stage at--"
"Dad!"
"Sorry." But he doesn't sound sorry. He sounds happy, and concerned, and sort of indulgent. He plops a big scoop of goma-ae onto Yosuke's plate, and bids him eat. Souji's already digging in.
This is good.
__________________________________________________________________________________ ...and that's it! Hope the long wait didn't totally ruin the ending! And, wow, when did the captcha thingies become impossible to decipher? AUGH!
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
April 25 2012, 13:41:00 UTC
Oh my god, ANON. You don't know how happy I was to see this update. To be completely honest, this fic is probably 70-80% of the reason I'm still on the kink meme at all (not that the other anons aren't doing good work here -- but I've been here for a couple of years right now, and I'm definitely starting to feel like it's time for me to move on), so it meant so much to me to finally see it finished, and to see you here again one last time? wait, no, now I'm just getting morbid, and to get this sense of, I don't even know, closure for these guys and myself. Like, you've been one of my favorite parts of the whole meme, and this story in particular fills me with so many feelings, and I feel like we've all gone on a ~journey~ together (even though anonymity means it's been a lot easier for me to identify you than it has for you to ever identify me -- but take my word that I've been here all along! I've tried to comment as often as I could). It's like the closing of a really special chapter of my internet life.
/rambling
As for the update itself, I'm so glad that things are looking up for Souji and Yosuke and that they're finally on the road to some sort of stability. I think you did a really good job of making Souji "work" for his forgiveness so that it doesn't feel too easy now to see them reconcile; you really get the sense that they've both grown a lot, and that they're going to continue to grow together, and it's this really great thing (that wouldn't have been nearly so meaningful if there hadn't been so much angst and conflict preceding it). I know I must have commented to this effect at some point on one of your stories, but one of my favorite things about the way you write Souji and Yosuke's relationship is how they both have a lot of issues, but their relationship is still a fundamentally positive thing that helps them both to be their best selves (although with Souji it certainly takes a while to get to that point). Like, they're messed up, but they're exactly the sort of messed up that one another needs, and they're able to grow into better people together. I felt like the story left them on a really good note.
Also: Yosuke, the viral music sensation! It sounds about right that he would get shopped around variety shows for about a year, to who knows what degree of commercial success after that. I would worry about all the trolling and backlash he's going to be subjected to as part and parcel of being famous . . . except I guess that Souji unintentionally gave him a crash course in learning to deal with trolls, so he's probably equipped to handle them now. "JOKE'S ON YOU, HATERS; NONE OF YOU CAN MAKE ME FEEL AS BAD AS THE PERSON I LOVE DID. :D :'D"
::did I mention that I love your Yosuke::
::because I really love your Yosuke::
This comment is getting pretty long and incoherent, so I should probably wrap things up here, haha. But one last thing I want to say/ask as long as you're around -- this should be treated as the most optional of optional suggestions, but have you ever considered uploading some of your longer stories like this to a place where they can exist in a single document (like as a series of LJ entries, or an AO3 story, or even a html file uploaded to a site like pastebin or mediafire)? I've saved all the LJ comment threads religiously, but a part of me would selfishly love to have a clean version of some stories where you don't have to worry about things like threaded comments getting squashed at the edge of the page. That said, I know that reformatting and reuploading can be a total pain, and you've already done so much for us just by writing these stories, so I really don't want to push. Just know that if you ever did do such a thing, I would download the fics again in a heartbeat. <3
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
April 26 2012, 02:01:48 UTC
And thank YOU for the lovely comment! <3 <3 <3 I was beginning to think I totally screwed up the ending, as the days were passing, and nobody was saying anything! Phew! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. In fact, it sort of felt like a weird meme journey for me, as well...not just with this fic, but with everything I've written here. I normally don't write fanfic or participate in fandom at all, but this was just the outlet I needed during a time of...well, having the worst/most boring job in the world, and needing SOMETHING to fill up these insanely long, dull shifts with. But I've definitely moved on professionally since then, and you're probably right about the whole "one last time" bit. I might occasionally write a shorter fill, when I have a dull day at my current job, or when it's raining and there's nothing to do, but I don't think I'll have the time or energy to commit to something quite as long and involved as this, again. Oh, and I might finish "Souji Pees on Everyone," at some point...ha, ha, ha.
In a way, it's sort of sad to say goodbye, or so long, or whatever I'm saying, here...even though the meme is anonymous, it WAS a big (though strange) part of my life, for a while.
I'm glad it came across that a lot of growth/maturing had gone on, on both sides; that's really what I was going for, with the ending...that Yosuke had started to find his confidence, and Souji had started to be honest with himself/others...and they could go from there.
Hmm, I have given a passing thought to putting my meme fics somewhere more convenient, but laziness (and complete technical incompetence; can't think of an easy way to preserve the formatting, as you say) has won out, so far. I guess if I ever get another boring job and have some extra time on my hands, I might. Ha, ha! I also feel kind of silly backing up kink meme fanfiction, as if it were something that deserved preservation for posterity! :-D :-D :-D
But I have to say, thank you again for sticking with me through this whole fill, especially with the SLOW updates, towards the end. If I ever do post my fics anywhere else, I'll post a link to the meme so that anyone who is interested can go there.
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
January 12 2013, 16:50:32 UTC
Anon who originally hoped the author might re-upload the story elsewhere (and was just now checking flatview by chance -- hello!)
Ooh! Do you happen to know a nice way to archive it, by any chance? Because I was recently trying to back up the part that's on the old meme, and discovered that LJ's new comment scheme and its fancy expand option make saving whole pages a nightmare. If there's a way to save this fic (or any other kink meme fill) and preserve the formatting without having to copy-paste the code of each individual comment by hand, I would love you forever.
(Hope it's okay if I ask this, authornon -- wouldn't want to tread on your toes! I just adore this fic and would like to have a hard copy that looks as pretty as possible, just in case livejournal does ever give up the ghost.)
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
April 30 2012, 04:25:42 UTC
Oh. My. This has been quite a ride. Thank you. I'm really really glad I only just read the whole thing this morning, because I don't know how I could have waited that long between updates.
I love that Souji's fucked up in his own way, too. But I really REALLY love that bit about him not being everything to Yosuke because as much as I enjoy their get-together fics, I also enjoy Yosuke growing in that direction as a character, even without the yay-I-nailed-down-the-leader aspect.
I love all the little details about Yosuke with the rest of the team: his BFFery with Kanji, Naoto not tolerating him but actually liking him, Yukiko being ruthless, Chie actually being attracted to him at first...yeah.
Anyway basically this was amazing, how you made them work for it, how you made US work for it, heh. I'm glad I decided to read this fic instead of something productive and socially-desirable. (Real life? Blech.) Thank you, again. I also hope you get this on AO3 or somewhere for easy bookmarking and reccing.
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
May 2 2012, 03:37:35 UTC
Thank you so much for reading, and for commenting! It really means a lot, to know people enjoyed it! <3 <3 <3
I'm glad it worked for you, Yosuke growing out of his extreme neediness a bit...I always thought he would NEED that kind of perspective and growth before he could really have a mature relationship, even without all the conflict involved with this fill.
And I have to say, the little snippets with the rest of the team were some of my favourite parts to write. It was fun to imagine how Yosuke might relate to them, both at his worst moments and with his growing confidence. :-)
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
May 7 2012, 18:25:25 UTC
I liked the ending, actually! And yes, it was worth the wait (I'm sorry I didn't see this until Marukyu posted it, though).
I also have to praise the "buddy moments" between Yosuke and the other IT. I romantically ship Yosuke ONLY with Souji, but I have a major soft spot for friendship moments between him and everyone else (especially the first years).
I'm not very good with reviews and I'm out of time, so I apologize this isn't more in-depth. Lovely work, Writer!Anon!
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
May 10 2012, 08:59:47 UTC
Thank you anon for such an amazing story. I loved reading every part of it and as somebody above said, this is one story I wanted to finish reading on the meme (I've been on here way too long too). Its a shame you can't repost it elsewhere with the formatting but I'll still keep the link saved. There are a few truly epic takes crafted on this meme, and this has got to be one of the best. Thanks again and good luck with any future endeavours! :)
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
June 21 2013, 12:20:18 UTC
Hey there! So, I don't know if you're still checking responses to this fill (probably not, after over a year) . . . but if by any chance you see this comment, I'm the anon who asked about whether you were going to repost this fic elsewhere, and I have a question! I had some free time on my hands recently, so I converted this fill into a html document, just so that I'd have a pretty and readable version of it on my computer without all the LJ threading. Now it's just sitting on my computer, but I'm wondering--would you be okay with me possibly sharing it with other people? It's properly attributed to you and includes a link to the original meme thread, and I wouldn't be hosting it as a webpage, just uploading the file to mediafire or something so that interested parties can download it.
I totally get if this is something you don't feel comfortable with, in which case I won't go and share the file with anyone else; but if you are okay with me uploading the file and linking it on-meme, let me know! Either way, I feel like I should thank you again for sharing this AWESOME story with us, and I hope you're doing well now. ♥
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
June 28 2013, 17:08:17 UTC
Just came across this, and got so caught up in the story that I read it all in one setting. Anon, you are crazy and BRILLIANT. I love Souji and Yosuke (which is saying a lot, because he's the type of character I usually cannot stand, and yet you made me adore him the most) and Yosuke's dad and everyone in this fic, and I love what you did at the end. It felt like we went on a journey together, and a very entertaining, satisfying one too.
2012-12-25 5:22 AM (link)
Hehehe, you always sound whiny, but that's why we heart you. (Just teasing!) Have fun with "Internet BF." And if you can't get those leather pants off, you could always keep them on, and take some pics for your fans….just sayin'….
DAT ASS! ::trollface::
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blancmange_party
2012-12-25 5:23 AM (link)
HAPPY XMAS/NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!! (I'm getting your album for Xmas, and you were also just on the radio, LOL.)
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carpal_bong
2012-12-25 5:25 AM (link)
gdi, i never get first comment any moar. remember when it used to be just me replyin 2 most of ur entries? i was the original hana fan. don't forget it. lol neway, glad its still workin out with u guys. i was like "no wai" when u first got back with him, but i guess u knew wat u were doin. gl gettin out of your pants.
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snibblefnoo
2012-12-25 5:25 AM (link)
u suck
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snibblefnoo
2012-12-25 5:25 AM (link)
and t.m. revolution sucks too
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snibblefnoo
2012-12-25 5:26 AM (link)
you should suck each others dicks
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harbl_boat
2012-12-25 5:26 AM (link)
I LOVE YOU, HAPPY HOLIDAYS! MY SISTER NAMED HER CAT AFTER YOU, AND BTW, SHE LOVED IT WHEN YOU WORE THAT HELLO KITTY SHIRT! YOU SHOULD WEAR IT AGAIN ON YOUR SUMMER TOUR! SEE YOU THEN (FROM THE AUDIENCE, DOn'T FREAK, I'M NOT A STALKER!!@!!!!!)
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harbl_boat
2012-12-25 5:27 AM (link)
PS DON'T LISTEN TO SNIBBLFLU, HE JUST JELLY CAUSE NOBODY SUCKS HIS DICK!
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mrnorrible
2012-12-25 5:32 AM (link)
Didn't you get my e-mail? I took an earlier train, and am at my uncle's house now, so you've exactly 15 minutes to get out of those pants. ;-)
(Just kidding. I'll give you time to shower and eat, and so forth. But I am here, so call me the second you're ready. Miss you!)
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"It worries me, sometimes," he says. Yosuke's heard this before, too, heard it enough times that he doesn't even roll his eyes. "There are people who like him because he's so vulnerable, because of things like the rose, and his vomiting on the stage at--"
"Dad!"
"Sorry." But he doesn't sound sorry. He sounds happy, and concerned, and sort of indulgent. He plops a big scoop of goma-ae onto Yosuke's plate, and bids him eat. Souji's already digging in.
This is good.
__________________________________________________________________________________
...and that's it! Hope the long wait didn't totally ruin the ending! And, wow, when did the captcha thingies become impossible to decipher? AUGH!
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/rambling
As for the update itself, I'm so glad that things are looking up for Souji and Yosuke and that they're finally on the road to some sort of stability. I think you did a really good job of making Souji "work" for his forgiveness so that it doesn't feel too easy now to see them reconcile; you really get the sense that they've both grown a lot, and that they're going to continue to grow together, and it's this really great thing (that wouldn't have been nearly so meaningful if there hadn't been so much angst and conflict preceding it). I know I must have commented to this effect at some point on one of your stories, but one of my favorite things about the way you write Souji and Yosuke's relationship is how they both have a lot of issues, but their relationship is still a fundamentally positive thing that helps them both to be their best selves (although with Souji it certainly takes a while to get to that point). Like, they're messed up, but they're exactly the sort of messed up that one another needs, and they're able to grow into better people together. I felt like the story left them on a really good note.
Also: Yosuke, the viral music sensation! It sounds about right that he would get shopped around variety shows for about a year, to who knows what degree of commercial success after that. I would worry about all the trolling and backlash he's going to be subjected to as part and parcel of being famous . . . except I guess that Souji unintentionally gave him a crash course in learning to deal with trolls, so he's probably equipped to handle them now. "JOKE'S ON YOU, HATERS; NONE OF YOU CAN MAKE ME FEEL AS BAD AS THE PERSON I LOVE DID. :D :'D"
::did I mention that I love your Yosuke::
::because I really love your Yosuke::
This comment is getting pretty long and incoherent, so I should probably wrap things up here, haha. But one last thing I want to say/ask as long as you're around -- this should be treated as the most optional of optional suggestions, but have you ever considered uploading some of your longer stories like this to a place where they can exist in a single document (like as a series of LJ entries, or an AO3 story, or even a html file uploaded to a site like pastebin or mediafire)? I've saved all the LJ comment threads religiously, but a part of me would selfishly love to have a clean version of some stories where you don't have to worry about things like threaded comments getting squashed at the edge of the page. That said, I know that reformatting and reuploading can be a total pain, and you've already done so much for us just by writing these stories, so I really don't want to push. Just know that if you ever did do such a thing, I would download the fics again in a heartbeat. <3
Thank you again for sharing this story with us!
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In a way, it's sort of sad to say goodbye, or so long, or whatever I'm saying, here...even though the meme is anonymous, it WAS a big (though strange) part of my life, for a while.
I'm glad it came across that a lot of growth/maturing had gone on, on both sides; that's really what I was going for, with the ending...that Yosuke had started to find his confidence, and Souji had started to be honest with himself/others...and they could go from there.
Hmm, I have given a passing thought to putting my meme fics somewhere more convenient, but laziness (and complete technical incompetence; can't think of an easy way to preserve the formatting, as you say) has won out, so far. I guess if I ever get another boring job and have some extra time on my hands, I might. Ha, ha! I also feel kind of silly backing up kink meme fanfiction, as if it were something that deserved preservation for posterity! :-D :-D :-D
But I have to say, thank you again for sticking with me through this whole fill, especially with the SLOW updates, towards the end. If I ever do post my fics anywhere else, I'll post a link to the meme so that anyone who is interested can go there.
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Ooh! Do you happen to know a nice way to archive it, by any chance? Because I was recently trying to back up the part that's on the old meme, and discovered that LJ's new comment scheme and its fancy expand option make saving whole pages a nightmare. If there's a way to save this fic (or any other kink meme fill) and preserve the formatting without having to copy-paste the code of each individual comment by hand, I would love you forever.
(Hope it's okay if I ask this, authornon -- wouldn't want to tread on your toes! I just adore this fic and would like to have a hard copy that looks as pretty as possible, just in case livejournal does ever give up the ghost.)
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I love that Souji's fucked up in his own way, too. But I really REALLY love that bit about him not being everything to Yosuke because as much as I enjoy their get-together fics, I also enjoy Yosuke growing in that direction as a character, even without the yay-I-nailed-down-the-leader aspect.
I love all the little details about Yosuke with the rest of the team: his BFFery with Kanji, Naoto not tolerating him but actually liking him, Yukiko being ruthless, Chie actually being attracted to him at first...yeah.
Anyway basically this was amazing, how you made them work for it, how you made US work for it, heh. I'm glad I decided to read this fic instead of something productive and socially-desirable. (Real life? Blech.) Thank you, again. I also hope you get this on AO3 or somewhere for easy bookmarking and reccing.
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I'm glad it worked for you, Yosuke growing out of his extreme neediness a bit...I always thought he would NEED that kind of perspective and growth before he could really have a mature relationship, even without all the conflict involved with this fill.
And I have to say, the little snippets with the rest of the team were some of my favourite parts to write. It was fun to imagine how Yosuke might relate to them, both at his worst moments and with his growing confidence. :-)
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I also have to praise the "buddy moments" between Yosuke and the other IT. I romantically ship Yosuke ONLY with Souji, but I have a major soft spot for friendship moments between him and everyone else (especially the first years).
I'm not very good with reviews and I'm out of time, so I apologize this isn't more in-depth. Lovely work, Writer!Anon!
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I totally get if this is something you don't feel comfortable with, in which case I won't go and share the file with anyone else; but if you are okay with me uploading the file and linking it on-meme, let me know! Either way, I feel like I should thank you again for sharing this AWESOME story with us, and I hope you're doing well now. ♥
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