Beta anyone?

[badly_knitted]

Hi, friends, is there anyone who could do a quick beta on a short piece for torchwood_fest ? Just need to check it reads okay and that I haven't missed any typos. Posting begins at the start of next month and despite all my challenges, I wanted to write something for the Summer Fest.

Anyone who has time to write, check out the prompts list - more writers are always welcome!