Comments | badly_knitted: FAKE Ficlet: Gridlocked

badly_knitted

FAKE Ficlet: Gridlocked

May 17, 2016 19:34

Title: Gridlocked

Fandom: FAKE

Author: badly_knitted

Characters: Dee, Ryo

Rating: PG

Setting: About midway through the manga.

Summary: Dee and Ryo get stuck in traffic while working.

Word Count: 586

Written For: lobeliar’s prompt ‘Any, Any, caught in traffic,’ at fic_promptly.

Disclaimer: I don’t own FAKE, or the characters. They belong to the wonderful Sanami Matoh.

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Comments 2

lil_1337 May 18 2016, 00:33:52 UTC

I really like the flow of this piece. The banter is good and it shows clearly the differences between Dee's and Ryo's personalities.

badly_knitted May 18 2016, 10:49:56 UTC

Thank you! I love writing banter between them =)

Opposites attract; I think they work so well as partners, as well as a couple, because of their differences. I love how Dee can nap all day when there's paperwork to do, but then gets impatient to be DOING something when there's a crime scene to visit or a bad guy to chase. Ryo just does what needs doing, and finds ways to overcome obstacles. He has a lot more patience.