Drabble: For Love Of Family

Oct 26, 2012 16:13



Title: For Love Of Family

Author: badly_knitted

Characters: Tosh

Rating: G

Written For: Challenge 257 - Between the Devil and the deep blue sea at tw100

Spoilers: For Fragments

Summary: Family means everything to Tosh.

Disclaimer: I don’t own Torchwood, or the characters.

A/N: Beta thanks to timelordshines , without whose insight I never would have finished this one. I’ve tinkered with ( Read more... )

toshiko sato, fic, torchwood fic, drabble, fic: g

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katwillow October 26 2012, 15:32:16 UTC
well done and a good use of a painful prompt

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badly_knitted October 26 2012, 15:45:26 UTC
Thank you! I really wanted to write about Tosh. That scene in Fragments, as she builds the Sonic Modulator - you just know it's not going to end well, but she's desperate and more afraid for her mother than for herself. It just seemed to fit, no matter what she does she can't win.

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too_beauty October 26 2012, 16:01:58 UTC
Loved it! Tosh is another of the silent and most cherished character! Pity she did not get more action inthe series!

I can really see her thinking that!

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badly_knitted October 26 2012, 17:16:38 UTC
Thank you, I think that was a defining moment for Tosh's character, which makes it all the more ridiculous that we only found out about it just before she died. The characters were never properly explored until they were about to die, except for Gwen.

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timelordshines October 26 2012, 16:18:12 UTC
It is nice to see Tosh starring in a drabble. We dont see enough of her.
I like how you finished this off. Very nice :-)
You would have finished it without my beta - I only added a couple of words!

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badly_knitted October 26 2012, 17:19:42 UTC
You got me thinking again and nudged me in the right direction, I probably would have abandoned it otherwise and tried something else.

There isn't enough about Tosh, I really need to do more drabbles about her. I'll try in future, she's a very under-used character, which is a shame.

Thank you!

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iantojjackh October 26 2012, 16:30:47 UTC
Ooo. Poor Tosh. She was really stuck with that choice. The things we do for loved ones.

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badly_knitted October 26 2012, 17:23:20 UTC
Thank you.

It was such a complicated situation. I got the sense that she loved what she was doing, building the Sonic Modulator, even though she was fully aware of how dangerous it was, but it was also something she had to do in an attempt to save her mother, even knowing the likely consequences for herself. It was her duty as a daughter.

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aviv_b October 26 2012, 16:44:49 UTC
Excellent drabble. (You stole my idea Wah!!!)

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badly_knitted October 26 2012, 17:25:27 UTC
0.0 Sorry! Hope you'll still write yours! There's always the need for more Tosh drabbles.

Thank you.

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