Bingo Fic: Miracle Sleep Aid

[badly_knitted]

Title: Miracle Sleep Aid

Author: badly_knitted

Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto, mentions the Doctor

Rating: PG

Word Count: 1021

Summary: Jack believes he will be plagued by insomnia for eternity, until he discovers the perfect cure.

Spoilers: Very slight for Doctor Who - Parting of the Ways.

Warnings: Vague mentions of temporary canon character death (Jack).

Written

Comments

[lilyrose225]

Yay~! So fluffy!

Hum, could be mistaken (been a while since I've seen canon) but I think the first time they had sex was after Suzie, the second time. Unless I'm completely misconstruing the stopwatch scene, of course. It's not a flow-breaker, but it's definitely noticeable to someone paying attention.

[badly_knitted]

I think that's right, as far as I'm concerned. This is set after the Year That Never Was though, and it's not the first time they've slept together, just the first time since Jack came back from his travels with the Doctor - hence the wording of taking Jack BACK into his bed. It may be the first time that they've called it making love instead of having sex though, now they've acknowledged that they're in a relationship.

Thank you!

[lilyrose225]

Ahh, oops. I missed that. ^.^' Sorry, it totally makes sense, now that I'm not being a dolt.

(here we go again... succumbing to Foot, In Mouth syndrome...)

[badly_knitted]

*grins* we all do it - the things I've had to look at again because they didn't make sense the first time just because I misread (or missed) a word.

[toshiani007]

I think that really happened, it's so accurate.
Loved it!!!
Kissitos!!!

[badly_knitted]

Thank you! I like to think they'd be a comfort to each other when they have nightmares.

*hugs and kissitos*

[bluelilacs]

This was sweet.

How wonderful that Jack is so comforted by Ianto's presence that he can finally sleep through the night after all these years.

[badly_knitted]

Jack feels so much better now he can sleep, and he doesn't get himself killed so often because he's more alert. It's a win/win situation!

Thank you!

[iantojjackh]

Yah love this, like in said before. Not exactly fully fluffy, but just enough to be so true for these two given the time line. Jack surely did have nightmares

If you need anything else betaed you can send it to me.

[badly_knitted]

Thanks *hugs* Don't know if there will be any more betaing to do, I only have two more to write and one of them won't make sense to anyone who hasn't read the previous 6 in the series that haven't been posted yet, lol!

I left the first paragraph as it was because it's supposed be a bit dizzying, that's how Jack feels about the whirlwind of events, but I think I fixed everything else you mentioned, and I tried to fluff the end up a little more (that sounds kinky, lol! Getting their ends fluffed...) Thanks again for looking it over at such short notice!

[milady_dragon]

The absolute best cure for insomnia there ever was. *sigh*

[badly_knitted]

Would that we could all have a cuddly Ianto in our beds!

Thank you!