Bingo Fic: Fixed Points

[badly_knitted]

Title: Fixed Points

Author: badly_knitted

Characters/Pairing: Jack/Ianto, The Doctor (11th)

Rating: G

Word Count: 1216

Summary: Jack’s not wrong, just incomplete, but the Doctor can fix that.

Spoilers: Not really.

Warnings: None

Written For: My

Comments

[badly_knitted]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you think Eleven sounds right, the Doctor is not an easy character to write so I always wonder if I'm getting anywhere close =)

I've got one more bingo fic almost finished, just needs a final edit, but I'm having problems with the one I'm working on, an AU 4 parter for four or my squares. The first part is done, but I'm struggling with the second part, haven't written anything on it for a couple of weeks, which isn't good. I'll have to try to make progress with it this week.

[timelordshines]

Great start to your bingo!
You got the doctor just right, and i love your reasoning behind why there have to be two immortals.
And you got the doctor to apologise to Jack in a believable way without having to resort to ianto threatening him! :-)
Well done!
I look forward to reading the rest of your bingo fills :-)

[badly_knitted]

Thank you! Glad you think I got the Doctor right, he's tricky to write! I figured Eleven would be more understanding than Ten ;)

Ack! I have to write them first o_O

I'm working (or supposed to be) on a four-parter for four squares - I've got the first part done, but the second part is causing trouble, I've probably told you about it. Anyway, I'll try to work on that a bit this week, but I thought I'd better start posting them here at least, then when I have a line posted (if I ever get one complete) I can link to the community. Bingo fic writing is hard!

[timelordshines]

If you need a beta or a sounding board, you know my email :-)
Bingos are hard. I can never do them a line at a time. I just have to write whichever fill gets my bunnies hopping at the time. I normally have at least 15 written before I get even one bingo!
I'm still waiting for my card. Why do I always think I'm never going to put myself through the pain of another bingo, then give in a few months into it, thereby leaving myself even less time to complete it and causing myself more stress? Not that I dont love bingos- they are fun but hard! And I really need to get back into writing.

[badly_knitted]

I hope you get your card soon!

Most of the prompts aren't inspiring anything, so I'm trying to work on something I actually know what I want to do with (gah, dreadful grammar but I'm too tired to put it right!)

Thanks, I'll be in touch if I need to. First I should read what I've got and see if I can move forward rom where I left off. Maybe I'll take a look tonorrow, right now I shoukd get to bed!

[milady_dragon]

Your Eleven is just lovely. This was just wonderful, because Jack deserves someone with him...he deserves Ianto with him. They really are soulmates.

I just loved this, and now will go to AO3 and download it to my Kindle. :)

[badly_knitted]

*beams* I'm honoured you think it's good enough to be saved =D

I love Eleven, he seems far more understanding and accepting than Ten, who it seems never looks beyond the surface of people, he makes up his mind about people without getting to know them. Well, he's like that with Jack anyway.

Now Jack and Ianto can explore the future together!

Thank you!

[iantojjackh]

Aww how perfect. Yah they get to spend eternity together.

[badly_knitted]

That's the way it should be, in my mind. No more lonely Jack, he can keep his Ianto forever =)

Thank you!

[excentric397]

This just makes me so happy. Ten was such an ass, he was not what I would have chosen as a role model in a show that I believe was supposed to be aimed at children, at least to start. Eleven kind of still was a child, at least as far as I watched. I quit when Amy and Rory...well, you know. No angst here, just The Doctor doing the right thing for once, and everybody not only lives, they all win, as well. Thank you so much for sharing. My mac is having baaaad issues, and I needed a day-brightener. This is it. Woo Hoo!

[badly_knitted]

Thank you!

I agree, Ten just got way too dark, plus he had attitude problems.

Writing this made me happy, it's just Fluff and happy endings, the way it should be =)