Re: The Plass In Summerexcentric397November 5 2015, 19:53:51 UTC
Have I not mentioned that before? I love it. Truly.
This bit captures them all so well: "In the centre of the group was a sour-faced man with a strident voice that carried easily across the distance, even though she couldn’t tell what he was saying. To his left walked a pretty Oriental woman who was deep in conversation with Suit Guy. She wondered if this was Suit Guy’s significant other. The last member of the group was a busty brunette, hanging on to Coat Guy’s arm and talking non-stop. Coat Guy didn’t seem to be listening, he was watching Suit Guy from the corner of his eye, a wistful expression on his face."
It's all such a synopsis of their relationship, just looked on from someone else's eyes,and that makes it so real. And the last section just made it perfect. I keep my most favs on my older Kindle (also on Dropbox and on my hard drive, just in case), and this was one of the first ones to go there.
Re: The Plass In Summerbadly_knittedNovember 5 2015, 20:33:10 UTC
With all the stories I've written and all the comments I've received, literally numbering in the thousands, it's really hard to keep track of who has sad what.
Thank you, I really liked that part myself, trying to see the team from an outsider's POV, so I'm glad it worked for you. I'm flattered that you like it so much! It does seem to be one of my most popular fics. =)
Re: The Plass In Summerbadly_knittedNovember 5 2015, 22:01:04 UTC
It's one of my own favourites.
Falling Asleep on the Job is another that gets a lot of hits. Sometimes it surprises me which ones have the most appeal, it's not always those I think I did the best job on or the ones I like best.
Re: The Plass In Summerexcentric397November 5 2015, 23:02:45 UTC
Napping is important regardless. Sometimes I nap whether I want to or not. My body just says, we're doing this now, so get over it. Yes, bod. whatever you want. LOL I know, my proofreading skills are taking a...nap.
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Yes, I wish it could have ended this way too. At least it can in my head!
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Thank you!
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This bit captures them all so well:
"In the centre of the group was a
sour-faced man with a strident voice that carried easily across the
distance, even though she couldn’t tell what he was saying. To his left
walked a pretty Oriental woman who was deep in conversation with Suit
Guy. She wondered if this was Suit Guy’s significant other. The last
member of the group was a busty brunette, hanging on to Coat Guy’s arm
and talking non-stop. Coat Guy didn’t seem to be listening, he was
watching Suit Guy from the corner of his eye, a wistful expression on
his face."
It's all such a synopsis of their relationship, just looked on from someone else's eyes,and that makes it so real. And the last section just made it perfect. I keep my most favs on my older Kindle (also on Dropbox and on my hard drive, just in case), and this was one of the first ones to go there.
It's kind of the perfect story.
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Thank you, I really liked that part myself, trying to see the team from an outsider's POV, so I'm glad it worked for you. I'm flattered that you like it so much! It does seem to be one of my most popular fics. =)
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It's a good story, I see why it's so popular.
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Falling Asleep on the Job is another that gets a lot of hits. Sometimes it surprises me which ones have the most appeal, it's not always those I think I did the best job on or the ones I like best.
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