Drabble: No Dominion

Oct 06, 2013 14:37


Title: No Dominion

Author: badly_knitted

Characters: Jack

Rating: G

Written For: Challenge 297 - Seconds at tw100

Spoilers: They Keep Killing Suzie, Dead Man Walking, etc.

Summary: Jack, from death back to life.

Disclaimer: I don’t own Torchwood, or the characters.

No Dominion... )

fic, torchwood fic, angst, tw100, jack harkness, drabble, fic: g

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aviv_b October 6 2013, 17:16:14 UTC
What a great description of Jack coming back. The suspension of time has a nice creepy vibe to it.

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badly_knitted October 6 2013, 17:19:42 UTC
Thank you. I kind of wonder if Jack would be aware of how much time has passed while he's been dead or would it seem endless and no time at all, both at the same time? It's a puzzle...

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timelordshines October 6 2013, 17:34:32 UTC
Nice.
Good use of the prompt.
Very atmospheric descriptions.

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badly_knitted October 6 2013, 19:27:25 UTC
Thank you, I rather like this one myself although it's different from how I first imagined it. I think this version works better though.

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too_beauty October 6 2013, 19:11:00 UTC
wow what was an awesome description!
I'm sure it must be difficult for him to wait for that dragging back ...

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badly_knitted October 6 2013, 19:29:48 UTC
Thank you. He never knows when it will happen, just that it's inevitable so he's stuck in a timeless moment until it does.

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owensheart October 6 2013, 19:30:28 UTC
Oh poor Jack. Great drabble.

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badly_knitted October 6 2013, 20:24:47 UTC
Thank you. It's tough for Jack, he never asked to be immortal but he's stuck with it for eternity, it must be a terrible burden at times.

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tardisjournal October 6 2013, 22:06:50 UTC
What a chilling description of what Jack experiences when he's dead! I'm not sure what's worse--being stuck in that dark, timeless place, or being dragged back into life. *Shudder*

Another great use of the prompt! You've really been inspired this week. :)

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badly_knitted October 6 2013, 22:12:38 UTC
Thank you, I'm quite pleased that I managed four. This one and Seconds are my favourites from this week I think. I'm pleased with the way they turned out.

Jack has to go through a lot when he dies and revives, it's obviously never easy judging by the way he gasps back to life, flailing.

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