I found another one...
One reason I dislike these types of fics is I don’t really enjoy reading the entire manga all over again with a Mary Sue shoved in between the original dialogue.
One Piece: The Daughter of Red Hair Shanks
"WE'RE IN BARRLES YOU MORON" I yelled back.
What is BARRLES?
A few hours past and I could here seagulls squawking, as I listened to them I began to drift she felt something catch the barrel I was in and lift me up.
So it’s 3rd-1st POV…
'I'm not that heavy' I thought angrily with an anime angry mark on her head.
It annoys me when they do that… “omg then her head blew up with a giant anime mark and sweatdrop and those little depressed lines!!1!”
I questioned herself.
Okay…
It was Luffy. He had black hair with a straw hat and black eyes with a scar under his left eye, he wear jean shorts and a red button up tank-top with arms pump up in the air, as he bursted through the barrel he punch the guy who was going to break the barrel.
I never know why people feel the need to describe canon characters. If the person’s reading the fic, most likely he/she knows the fandom, so they would know what the characters already look like.
I stood up from my crotch (bad choice of words is bad), I was 5 ft. 8 in. and 18 years old. I had long crimson red hair was into a fish-tail braid tied with a ribbon, with a white bandana over my head shadowing my eyes, and I wore a white t-shirt and black trousers that were tucked in my black boots with a red sash around my hips.
…Really. That’s cool.
"You little brats" both of the unknown pirates came at Me and Luffy with swords.
I love how she had to capitalize “Me” just to show how amazing she is.
I smirked and lifted my head to show them my eyes. My eyes a piercing emerald green and on my left eye were three red lines tattoos. The men were in shock as their own swords were pulled themselves away from them and floating in the air.
WHAAAT. WHAT. WHAT.
I smiled at Luffy as he found a crate of Apple…
… iPods and iPads and iPhones…
Coby had anime waterfall tears coming down his eyes.
And then Yuki “sweatdropped” and Luffy had those little lines flashing in front of his face to show he was laughing!!1!
"Well, we're gonna be King and Queen of the Pirates" we both said at the same time.
WHAT.
"NO WAY, ITS IMPOSSIBLE, IMPOSSIBLE, IMPOSSIBLE. THERE IS NO WAY ANYONE LIKE YOU GUYS CAN REACH THE PENTICLE (I read this as “testicle”…) DURING THIS GREAT PIRATE AGE, THERE'S JUST TO MANY OF THEM OUT THERE MEANNER AND BADDER-"
-snip-
"THEN I'M GONNA DO IT, I'M NOT GOING TO GET STUCK HERE AS CABIN BOY FOR THE REST MY LIFE, I'LL BREAK OUT, AND TURN RIGHT AROUND AND CATCH ALVIDA MYSELF"
SOMEONE SHUT COBY UP.
Luffy and I were about to join him when sword pocked through the door and the wall next to us.
Haha. Pocked. Hah.
I got off his back and got into a fighting stance. One of the pirate ran towards Luffy with his sword and tried to cut, but Luffy did a backflip, then head butt him. One was coming from behind, in a flash I was in front of him. I jump up, knocking his sword out his hand and punched him in the stomach. I land on my feet with grace.
Was I the only one laughing through this bit?
I jumped forward in the air and flipped. No one notice except Luffy knew that I had taken out six pieces of metal until I land.
Another group was charging at me. I took my six pieces and click then together and created two large Lances (Like Xaldin's FORM Kingdom Hearts II only Black and Red) one in each hand.
Okay, I can’t be the only one laughing right now.
He smiled "You didn't do bad yourself, Weather Girl"
… What did any of that have to do with the weather?
"Oh, I'm a rubber man and Yuki is weather user" Luffy said while stretched is mouth.
Oh. So she pretty much stole Nami’s fighting style. GOSH, they always pick on Nami! Why is it always Nami?!
"YOU ARE THE MOST UGLIEST THING IN THE SEA, I'D SAY YUKI IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL OF ALL THE SEAS" He yell at her.
Seriously, is anyone laughing?
We pull our fists back at the same time, he knock her club out of the way while my left arm became covered in wind gust.
Okay, so she can use some weird psychic power, she has a lance thing, and she can control the weather.
-_-
I was on top of the pole since I was the lightest only weighing 125 lb.
Why do we need to know this?
"I ate the Storm-Storm Fruit, I have the abilities of the weather control and element abilities." I said showing him my hands. One was wind and the other was water.
So it’s water, wind, fire, earth, snow, ice, and thunder/lighting. No, that’s not Sue-ish at all.
-stuff about Zoro here-
"Oh, bad boy, I like" I said with smirk.
I feel bad for Zoro.
I hit him on the head.
"Ow, why did ya hit me" he asked me.
"Cause I felt like it" I repeated Luffy's answer.
Very original, Miss Yuki Sue.
Oh, and have a summary (not for this fic).
One Piece Impel Down and Marineford Arc AU
Saiyan D. Karina,Mihawk,and Doflamingo are sent to Impel Down where they will be sent to Marineford along with Portgas D. Ace to be executed. AcexOc MihawkxOc LuccixOc and KakxOc. Note:Only one Oc, Naruto and Pokemon appear. Sengoku bashing.
… So many things wrong…