Oh lord, bad character naming is bad.

Jul 09, 2010 00:25


So, here's your average "girl falls into One Piece' story. Now, it may be the greatest self-insert fic on the internet, but I am immediately turned off by the summary for three reasons: (summary in bold)

Reason #1: The character's name...

A girl, Ebony,

Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way? Seriously, you'd think after My Immortal that this name in ANY fic would be taboo. Of course, maybe this person hasn't seen My Immortal, so I'll give them that. Lucky duck...

Reason #2: The failure to capitialize the title of the series and a clause that doesn't necessarily have to be read innocently...

gets thrown into the one piece world by a mysterious old woman and has to comply to her wishes.

Reason #3: Pointless reassurances...

This story includes Body swaps, damsels in distress, mirages, some NamiXCat, and way too much water. And never fear, it's not canon

What? You mean Oda really didn't write this? I'm SHOCKED.

I was amused. The fact that the story is entitled "I Try" only served to amuse me more. XP

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