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The fic "Why?" is an okay idea for a fic, but it runs into some, er, problems with the translation from the author's native Russian. Observe:
Bryony couldn t realize this moment, when she stoped feel anything.
Only pang of scalding cold sharp her body and her heart contracted of painful spasm like thousand needles went into it.
And then became frivolousness.
I know I shouldn't make fun, because if I tried to write fic in Russian, it would look much worse. But ... "And then became frivolousness" just screams Memetic Mutation, doesn't it?
Bryony couldn t realize this moment, when she stoped feel anything.
Only pang of scalding cold sharp her body and her heart contracted of painful spasm like thousand needles went into it.
And then became frivolousness.
I know I shouldn't make fun, because if I tried to write fic in Russian, it would look much worse. But ... "And then became frivolousness" just screams Memetic Mutation, doesn't it?