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Jul 28, 2005 15:31

Mannequin

Fandom: Labyrinth (AU)
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I have no delusions. Well, at least none suggesting I own the characters or the universe in which they appear.
Summary: For tourniquette99 who requested Evil!Jareth/Sarah that's believable and doesn't have to end happily. I hope this seems believable. There are no happily ever afters.
She dances in a ballroom. . . )

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nakedtoes July 28 2005, 19:47:56 UTC
I love this - the bleakness and emptiness, the sense that she's lost some of her humanity in the Goblin King's realm, Jareth's casual cruelty and the mention of her brother. Beautiful angst!

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ancarett July 28 2005, 20:08:18 UTC
Thank you. I always felt that, if she'd stayed, it would have been a very bleak existence.

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pashoshi July 28 2005, 20:32:28 UTC
Ooh, creepy. I really like this, in all it's bleakness. I'm glad to see this worked out for you in the end. ;-)

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ancarett July 28 2005, 21:01:41 UTC
Thanks! Sometimes you just have to get the right angle for the words to flow!

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xelloss_poo July 28 2005, 22:37:29 UTC
Oooo. This was just so lovely. It was beautifully written and the story of it just makes my skin tingle with delight. ^^

*bookmarks*

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ancarett July 28 2005, 22:42:22 UTC
Thank you for the lovely compliments!

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rosehiptea July 29 2005, 02:34:58 UTC
That's excellent. Very moving, and I can totally picture it.

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ancarett July 29 2005, 02:43:02 UTC
Thank you kindly!

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