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Feb 12, 2009 23:30

Ooh~ la la! Never in my wildest (and wettest) dreams did I ever think this kink meme would yield such passionate results! With nearly five thousand comments in the initial post, I figured it was high time we bring the naked party over into a new post to leave the first open for request followup and... other forms of fulfillment ( Read more... )

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It Wears You Down [5/5] anonymous February 16 2009, 21:08:31 UTC

The next thing he knows, the sun’s high up in the sky, and he’s tucked in his futon, still dressed in his clothes from yesterday. Dojima sits up, the blankets pooling around his waist, and he wonders when was the last time he had felt so refreshed, so alive. He hasn’t had this much quality sleep in ages either, and for a brief second, he can’t help but wonder what had made the difference.

Then it all comes back, a rush of muttered words, warm breath, and calloused fingers, and Dojima rushes out of his bedroom. The living room is empty; a small note on the table says that Nanako’s gone out to play with her friends. He then turns to look up the stairs, noticing that Souji’s door is closed.

Taking the steps three at a time, Dojima bounds upstairs and knocks on his nephew’s door, fearing the worst. When it opens a second later, though, he just finds Souji standing there, a faint smile on his lips. The boy looks a little more tired than he’s used to seeing him, but there is no fear, no regret in his stance and expression.

“Sleep well, Uncle? It’s past noon already.”

“Souji, I-About last night…”

The kid laughs, shoulders shaking lightly. “I told you, didn’t I?” he replies, taking a step closer to Dojima. A hand reaches up to cup his cheek, despite the stubble there. “I’ll help you shoulder the weight.

“I’ll help you forget about your worries.” His smile is warm, reassuring. “Even if just for a while.”

Not!OP sez anonymous February 16 2009, 22:45:35 UTC

that was so unbelievably hot. And sweet. Poor Dojima can't get a good night's sleep and Souji there to help him. XD

writer!anon anonymous February 17 2009, 02:19:29 UTC

Haha, thank you! :D

I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed it. ;o

OP anonymous February 17 2009, 08:40:35 UTC

OH GOD. I THINK I LOVE YOU FOREVER!

That was just... all kinds of amazing! Thank you so much, you wonderful writer!anon!

writer!anon anonymous February 17 2009, 17:32:09 UTC

D'awwwwww.

Yay! Well, I'm glad that you liked it! It makes this anon very happy to hear that. ♥

Re: It Wears You Down [5/5] anonymous February 18 2009, 05:03:41 UTC

Oh God that was hot.

Two thumbs way up, writer!Anon.

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Re: It Wears You Down [5/5] anonymous March 7 2009, 09:05:57 UTC

ANONYMOUS COMMENTING. LEARN HOW TO DO IT.

Re: It Wears You Down [5/5] anonymous March 17 2009, 20:23:23 UTC

Thank you anon. ;_; This is the most beautiful piece I've ever read for DojimaSouji, and it has such delicious smex that it brings out the fic's glorious beauty. Wonderful job. <333

Re: It Wears You Down [5/5] anonymous March 29 2009, 09:12:01 UTC

I demand a sequel to this~! >_< Please~~~?

Re: It Wears You Down [5/5] anonymous May 20 2009, 05:30:24 UTC

Wow. That made me all tingly to read.

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