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Coming to you live from a very steamy journal post~

Dec 30, 2008 18:16

Why, hello there, kittens! I'm Kanji, esteemed reporter of all things fabulous and ever so delightfully naughty, and I'm here with a most special update for a fandom just beginning its long, hard... journey into adulthood~!

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The Beginning of the Rest of Your Life (3/3) anonymous January 25 2009, 05:13:48 UTC

He heard her, but chose not to acknowledge it. Instead, he looked at his watch and stood up. "I gotta be getting back to Junes. They're throwing a big graduation party, so I guess it'd be kinda lame if the graduate didn't show." He turned around and looked down at Chie, still sitting cross-legged on the grass. "You wanna come? You can dragon kick my relatives when they start getting annoying."

Chie laughed, the first time she'd done so all day. "I don't have to get dressed up, do I?"

"Of course! We expect you in a ballgown and high heels," Yosuke teased, winking at her. "It's a party at Junes. Do you really think we have a dress code?" Without thinking, he reached a hand down to help her up. It only took him a second to realize his mistake; this was Chie, she didn't need a hand up. She was probably offended now, knowing her. He was just about to retract his hand when he felt her grab hold, her grip strong, but her skin much softer than he had expected. At first he was frozen, her hand in his, surprise and some other feeling mingling together in his stomach to create a paralysis that spread through his whole body without warning. But then she was staring at him with one eyebrow raised, and he snapped back to reality, his arm tensing to lift her onto her feet.

It surprised him even more when she didn't let go. He looked at her, but she wouldn't look at him; still, if he tilted his head, he could see the blush on the visible part of her cheek.

"Well?" Chie snapped suddenly, her voice tighter than usual. "We're gonna be late."

Yosuke blinked, then started walking up the path to the flood plain's sidewalk. Chie followed right next to him, never loosening her grip. It was a weird feeling, holding Chie's hand like this, but it was a nice one, too. Somehow it just felt... right.

Re: The Beginning of the Rest of Your Life (3/3) anonymous January 25 2009, 05:20:55 UTC

Not the OP - but this was fantastic! You got them both down perfectly; very bittersweet. Awesome work, anon!

Re: The Beginning of the Rest of Your Life (3/3) anonymous January 25 2009, 05:23:27 UTC

Not the OP, but I just had to drop by and say this really hit the spot for my inner Yosuke/Chie fan. ♥

A lovely read. :D *hands you some internetz*

Re: The Beginning of the Rest of Your Life (3/3) anonymous January 25 2009, 10:27:22 UTC

That. Was AMAZING. I love Chie/Yosuke but this is the first fic of them I've actually REALLY LIKED. And I especially love your portrayal of Yosuke's post-Souji-departure feelings.

Re: The Beginning of the Rest of Your Life (3/3) anonymous January 25 2009, 19:32:58 UTC

OP says THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! This was really really great, perfectly in character and just what I wanted.

Re: The Beginning of the Rest of Your Life (3/3) anonymous January 25 2009, 20:31:14 UTC

Writer says you're very welcome, and I'm glad it's what you wanted. :)

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