and doesn't the number six sound a lot like...? ;*

Oct 08, 2010 13:53

Oh my, everyone has been so patient. I take such a long time to hit my "peak," if you will, so I apologize for the delay!

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )

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Try and Keep Your Hands to Yourself [3/3] anonymous February 19 2011, 03:50:21 UTC
Souji laughed breathlessly, his fingers tangled in Yosuke's hair. "Maybe you should clean me up."

Yosuke spent a good amount of time on his neck first, teasing out those whines and whimpers he was so fond off, using his teeth the way Souji liked, before trailing his way down Souji's chest. Souji's cock touched his cheek as Souji shifted, and Yosuke considered doing something with it but decided not to and turned his attention to Souji's stomach instead. Souji's come - his come; they were so mixed there was no telling the difference - was thick in his mouth, and he swallowed when he looked up and saw Souji watching him.

"You've got some on your mouth," Souji said, and stopped him when he made to wipe it off. "Don't; I'll take care of it when I'm cleaning you."

Yosuke pictured it and resisted the urge to start touching himself again. "Like a good boy."

Souji smiled and guided his head back down with one hand. The other found Yosuke's and entwined their fingers. "But you've got to finish up first. Show me how dirty you can get cleaning up."

Yosuke got to work impressing him.

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Re: Try and Keep Your Hands to Yourself [3/3] anonymous February 19 2011, 17:49:02 UTC
This was really hot and sweet! Am I extrapolating too much if I guess that this fits in with the other dirty talk fill above? (With Yosuke being good at dirty talk, and Souji having an aversion to being touched or at least needing to take it slow . . . .) If I'm completely wrong and you're a different authornon, or the same author but the fills are meant to go separately, my bad. But either way, I really like your smut and the kindness of your Souji/Yosuke dynamic here. It makes me picture them having a long, loving, sexy relationship, which makes me happy. ♥

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writer!anon anonymous February 19 2011, 18:31:01 UTC
You're correct! I wrote both of them and they go together. I originally wanted to do a Souji/Yosuke fill for this prompt but the idea for the Dojima one popped into my head first and ended up being the one first written. After I finished that, I got some inspiration and wanted to try a more consensual take on this (and I figured the OP wouldn't mind getting more than one fill).

I'm glad you enjoyed this. ♪

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OP anonymous February 23 2011, 12:17:32 UTC
Damn straight I didn't mind getting a second fill! XD

This is more, how to say it, of a take on straight-up dirty talk, but still you manage to make it original by adding Yosuke standing above Souji and the adorableness in them wanting to take physical things slow even though they're pretty damn filthy in their minds. I found the dialog really IC and easy-flowing and I enjoyed reading it a lot.

My favorite part is Souji bit his lip. "Yosuke… I'd let you." I don't know what it is about it, but DAMN that blew my mind. I guess it's the though of Souji wanting his mouth fucked, haha. Oh, he'd look so pretty like that.

Thanks again, anon. You've made me a very, very happy OP. <3

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writer!anon anonymous February 23 2011, 17:08:30 UTC
In my head, even though these two are very much, 'We won't go past this point until we're sure we're ready,' they've still managed to find a lot of wiggle room and be pretty dirty with each other.

I'm glad you enjoyed this one too. :D

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