and doesn't the number six sound a lot like...? ;*
Oh my, everyone has been so patient. I take such a long time to hit my "peak," if you will, so I apologize for the delay!
SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )
SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )
Souji licked him. He usually didn't to this without being told; it was the head in his mouth with his hand stroking what he couldn't reach, or his sac being teased. What Souji did now - a long, slow, very wet pass of his tongue from sac to head; closed eyes and a moan unlike Dojima had ever heard from him - wasn't for him. It might have been a pleasure to receive those licks, to see Souji look up at him with lidded eyes, one good enough that Dojima almost took himself in hand and jerked off to come on his tongue, but Dojima knew the real intent behind them.
Souji thought he was winning. To hell with that.
"I said suck. Open your mouth." His cock bumped impatiently against Souji's lips.
Souji kissed it, tongue peeking out to tease the slit and taste precome. "Yes, Uncle."
"That's right." The acknowledgement of their relationship made his hips move, and the head of his cock disappeared into the warm wetness of Souji's mouth. "You're going to take it all today, Souji. It's been too long since we've done this. I've missed seeing you kneel like this."
Souji hummed, rolled his eyes, and moved a hand between his legs, not touching himself but close enough to tease. Playing it up or not, Dojima crept closer to orgasm. He'd seen Souji confident throughout this, seen him angry and resigned and crying, but wanton was new, these tempting looks and sighs unfamiliar territory.
Souji removed his mouth just enough to speak, the reverberations running across sensitive skin. "Make me gag, Dojima-san. I want you to use my mouth like you've thought about using my ass. I want to be so sore in the morning I can't speak." He didn't sound quite convincing enough but Dojima didn't care. He drove himself deeper in, earning a gasp, earning - of all things - a muffled laugh. Souji's eyes mocked, but his mouth worked more than willingly, cheeks hollowing, tongue caressing him, and one hand coming up to grab his sac.
Dojima did use his mouth, fucked it in long, deep strokes that kept Souji from saying anything else. His cock slid out covered in spit, slid in smoothly, and twice he took it out entirely to force it up against Souji's face, to make him lick it again and smear slick streaks of precome and saliva on his face.
Souji took it all, and during the moments he was free to talk he begged for more and told Dojima how good it was in a voice that would have landed half the cops in Inaba in jail.
"Your mouth's better full," Dojima said, though Souji's words aroused him more than anything in recent memory. "Keep talking and I'm going to paint your face white."
"Yes, yes."
"You'd like that, huh, lick it up like you were starving, let me cover your cheeks and your neck-"
"Everything," Souji said, and rolled his body distractingly. "Everywhere, anywhere you wanted, Dojima-san. I can take it; I want you to give it to me."
Dojima could have come like this easy. Souji had always been good - except for the first few times but that was to be expected - but this was above and beyond for him, his enthusiasm unusual, the look on his face as his lips closed around the shaft of Dojima's cock one he'd never worn before.
When Dojima figured it out, when it all clicked into place, he smiled and he slackened his pace.
"Whose cock have you been sucking?"
Souji touched his mouth and pulled away sticky fingers. His face was flushed, his hair stuck up, and his lips red and wet. "Yours, Uncle. Please let me keep going, please don't tease me."
"That's not what I'm talking about." Dojima let him suck on the tip, forced him to look up while he did it. "You've been… It's - let me guess - that Hanamura boy, isn't it? You've been burying your face in his lap and sucking his cock."
Souji froze, and Dojima had his answer. "No," Souji said flatly.
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Souji's breathing came hard and fast. His eyes were narrowed, the hand between his legs a fist like he wanted to take a swing.
Dojima took his cock in hand, mashed the tip to Souji's mouth, and kept it there until Souji opened up.
And then he was back in charge.
"How'd it start?" He asked. Souji wasn't moving, but that was fine; he'd asked to be used and Dojima was doing just that, forcing his cock past those swollen lips time and time again, watching as Souji swallowed and took more in with every push. "Lunch on the roof, some meet up in the school restroom? You came on to him, I'm sure - he's too damn jittery to approach you, and you're… Well, you just wanted it. Said it yourself that you thought about it, wanted to have him in your ass and order you to save his name." Dojima couldn't remember the kid's name now. It didn't matter. "Have you gotten that far? That's what you were thinking of just now, wasn't it? You were pretending I was him or remembering him and fooling yourself. Well, Souji, it's just me and you. That's my cock in your mouth, it was there before his, and…" He paused to groan and force Souji lower, to get every bit of him he was capable of holding in his mouth. Souji sounded close to gagging. "…you're about to swallow my come, not his."
He came with sharp jerks, spent himself down Souji's throat, and watched in satisfaction as Souji shut his eyes and took it with no defiant glare or attitude. Seeing him enjoy it, really enjoy it, would have been nice, but resignation worked well too as long as he understood where things stood.
He pulled out. "Lick me until I tell you to stop." He murmured as Souji obeyed - "That's good" and "Right there" and other encouragements - let it go for a bit before finally releasing Souji's hair and pushing him back. "That's enough."
Souji didn't stand up. He stared at Dojima and deliberately wiped his mouth on the back of his sleeve. As though that meant something.
"Don't be like that," Dojima said, in a better mood than when they'd started. "Why don't you do what you were talking about earlier, take care of yourself in front of me? No? Guess all that talk was for nothing."
He stood over Souji and tucked himself away. Souji watched him through his fringe, aroused but unwilling to do anything about it, and Dojima wondered when he'd give in, what he'd think about when he did - Hanamura or this.
He saw himself to the door and was surprised when Souji stood and followed him, staying in his room as Dojima entered the hallway. There was an odd, thoughtful look growing on his face, a weird smile.
"Something you want to say?"
"That dirty stuff you were saying earlier? I was hard during it, you know."
"I noticed," Dojima said, but his interest was piqued. Maybe now Souji would just admit-
"I was hard," Souji said, one hand on the door, "because I kept thinking about Yosuke does the same thing, talk dirty, and about-well, how much better at it he is than you."
With a final, quick smile, Souji closed and locked the door.
I hoped that met the OP's expectations. I feel like I wandered some. Also, this felt longer than six parts.
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Spectacular job~<333
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I woke up at 3am, read this comment, and went back to sleep with a huge smile on my face. I can't say that I've ever had someone admit to drooling on their keyboard that like but I'm flattered and also very, very amused by this admission.
Don't worry; I totally consider this an epic comment. ♥♥
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You're very welcome. Comments are these are a great thanks. ♪
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Souji's feistiness was just... mhmmm yeah. ♥
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usually Souji's more subdued when I write this pairing so it was an interesting change to write him with a little more attitude.
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So, once again, really sorry.
Now, first off, I saw in the comments to the second fill to this prompt that you wrote both! That really surprised me. You managed to capture two different voices, two different styles, not just topics (one noncon, one consenting and warm) and I salute you for being able to do that and do it good.
On to this prompt, what I love most about it is Dojima, how delusional he is, how he keeps making excuses to himself, how he probably deep down knows very well what he's doing is fucked up but fooling himself into thinking Souji's just proud and stubborn. He's a complete asshole and I love it, although my heart aches a little since I prefer him rough but at least sort-of nice, haha.
Your Souji is great too. I like how he keeps showing cracks but seals them up over and over, how he wants to stay blank but the distaste just gets to strong. And I really like when he finds a way out of it all, when he finally managed to get to his uncle, get some kind of revenge, uprising, maybe even winning and.... is shot down, 'cause Dojima sure ain't stupid either. When Souji gave away it was Yosuke he had on his mind, that second of silence, I winced so hard. I knew Dojima would use it against him as much as he could. Gah, that part hurt so good.
As for how your fill relates to the actual prompt I made, it was a take on it I would never have imagined and I truly, deeply cherish it. There's plenty of dirty talk, dirtybadwrong dirty talk and it both made me bite my lip and swear out loud, sometimes sexy, sometimes sexy-but-uncomfortable.
I'm a blessed OP, getting a fill like this. Thank you, anon.
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I'm pleasantly surprised by you being surprised I wrote both fills. It would have been pretty odd if I'd made Yosuke's POV sound like Dojima's so hearing they came out so distinctly is great. I felt bad about making Dojima such an absolute, complete jerk in this (I always feel a little bad putting him into this kind of position, sorry, Dojima-san 8|) but he fit it so well and played off of this version of Souji so nicely that I couldn't help it. I'll have to write him in a more stable family role to even it out. And this Souji was fun too; I'm such a 'everything turns out more or less okay/let there be fluff' person that I was surprised by how much I liked making these two clash.
I'm overjoyed to hear that you liked this so much, especially since the prompt was something I'm not terribly experienced with. <3 I'm glad, too, that the mention of Yosuke didn't throw everything off. I like him with Souji so much I couldn't resist sneaking him in.
Also, I blame you for making me wanting to write more wrong Dojima/Souji; I've got an idea or two knocking around in my head, trying to form themselves in something worth reading, and one of them even manages to make Dojima come off sort of nice near the end).
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