and doesn't the number six sound a lot like...? ;*

Oct 08, 2010 13:53

Oh my, everyone has been so patient. I take such a long time to hit my "peak," if you will, so I apologize for the delay!

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )

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Souji/Yosuke D/s 6/7 because anon can't count anonymous October 14 2010, 18:05:06 UTC
Souji pulled back enough for Yosuke to catch his breath, feeling his throat contract as he did, both under his palm and around the head of his cock. He hummed in pleasure. “And it feels so good, baby. You feel so good. Your throat is amazing.” He could almost see Yosuke’s chest swell with pride before he wasted a breath on a whimper and then went back to slow, shaky breathing through his nose.

“Yeah…” Souji stroked Yosuke’s throat gently, his fingers slipping back and forth over leather and metal. “I’m gonna come down it.” Another whimper. “Now be a good bitch and take it.” And with that Souji started thrusting; slowly letting his cock slide in and out of Yosuke’s mouth, pushing down his throat with every roll of his hips. He gave him a second to suck down a breath between his thrusts at first, heard them getting shakier and shakier, but soon sped up, taking Yosuke’s head in a steady grip and fucking his mouth none too gently. “Oh yes, that’s it. That’s it… Keep your tongue flat like that.”

Yosuke did gag a couple of times, when Souji relaxed his grip to let Yosuke’s teeth slide over the length of his cock - but kept still, showed no sign of wanting to break it off. It was hard to see from the upside down angle but Souji studied his face best he could and was able to catch him blinking away a few stray tears, could see saliva overflowing his mouth, rivulets of clear fluid running down his cheeks, streaking his face so beautifully Souji couldn’t help but pick up the pace. He felt his orgasm build rapidly, his balls tightening, his cock twitching and making Yosuke gag again. “Fuck, you look hot. You’re so-shit, I’ll come just from looking at you. Touch yourself, Yosuke. Jerk off. Come with me.”

Yosuke swallowed around his cock in reply, consciously or not, Souji had no idea, and his hand flew to his cock, fisting it hard, quick, jerky pulls that set off his hips again; thrusting up into his hand, fucking it while Souji fucked his mouth and the sight of it was just too much.

Souji nearly doubled over when he came, shoved as deep as was possible into Yosuke’s mouth, and let out a long, almost pained groan that ended in a quiet, high-pitched whine. He kept jerking his hips forward despite being already fully buried, his grip on Yosuke’s chin so tight it probably hurt, as he emptied himself down his throat.

As his orgasm ebbed away he realized he was still whining and it took him a moment to shut himself up, then another couple of seconds to let up his vice grip and pull out, a stream of saliva following and wetting Yosuke’s face even more as he desperately sucked down air - he didn’t make a single noise besides his harsh breathing as his orgasm hit him.

He came hard enough for it to spatter his neck.

Souji nearly found himself wanting to shove his cock back into Yosuke’s mouth just from the sight of it. All of Yosuke was the sweetest sight right now. He was an absolute mess: enough saliva running down his face to wet his hair; specks and streaks of come staining him from groin to throat, his chest and neck and face flushed a deep, deep red.

He was absolutely beautiful - the prettiest mess Souji had seen in a long time, giving his afterglow such a boost he almost laughed. Instead he sank back on his heels and lifted Yosuke’s head up, letting up the strain on his neck. He gently wiped his face with a sleeve, gingerly brushed tears from his lashes with a fingertip. “See..? Pretty boys do get messed up. Pretty badly.”

Yosuke gave him a weak upside down smile. “Yeah,” he croaked.

Souji took another round of wiping Yosuke’s face off. God, there was so much spit! It was almost ridiculous. He’d even gotten some in his nose and Souji made him blow it in his sleeve, made sure he could breathe properly. “You ok?”

“Never been better.” Yosuke’s laugh was hoarse and cracked.

Souji snorted quietly. “Here.” He unsteadily got to his feet, tugged his ruined shirt off, kicked the pants bunched around his ankles off as well and offered Yosuke his hands to help him sit up.

“Thanks.” Yosuke was still smiling as he made himself comfortable, even though he wasn’t meeting Souji’s eyes and instead looking down at himself, his hand coming up to wipe the come off his chest.

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Souji/Yosuke D/s 7/7 anonymous October 14 2010, 18:06:49 UTC
“No, wait.” Souji grabbed Yosuke’s wrist and held his hand out of the way while sinking down on his haunches between Yosuke’s legs. He leaned in and dragged his tongue, adding kissing and sucking when needed, from Yosuke’s cock up to his neck; doing his best to catch every drop of come in his mouth. He heard Yosuke moan quietly as he worked, making a warm glow spread in his belly.

When he felt he’d caught as much of it as he could, he hooked his finger in the ring on Yosuke’s collar, craned his neck and kissed him, pushing into his mouth with a come-coated tongue and wiping it off. The pleased little noises Yosuke made as they kissed made the glow flare up even more and spread up into Souji’s chest. He smiled against Yosuke’s lips, tugged him a little closer and kissed him harder when he felt him swallow, and didn’t pull back until there was only a faint taste left on his tongue.

He caught Yosuke’s eyes, still wet around the edges but smiling along with his mouth.

“I love you, you know.”

Yosuke’s smile grew wide enough to show teeth. “I love you too, despite being a sadistic prick.”

“You love me because I’m a sadistic prick.”

“…Maybe.”

“Besides, you should watch your mouth, pretty boy, or else I might have to plug it shut again.”

Mischief and a faint hint of arousal sparked into life in Yosuke’s eyes.

“Well… Pretty boys are meant to be messed up, after all.”

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OP anonymous October 14 2010, 21:50:11 UTC
Oh holy gods.

Seriously, that was amazing. It's so hard to find quality D/s fic like this. The emotions, the fluff, the sex, it's all just ngh *_* If I could, I would pay you for this, ngl.

And only Yosuke would be able to keep headphones working that long. Too bad about the red jeans, though XD

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writer!anon anonymous October 16 2010, 16:19:27 UTC
Happy you liked it! I did my best to weave in as much fluff as I could, so it's good to know it worked, haha.
Your comment is payment enough, trust me.

Well, it's to be expected when one spends so much time on one's knees. I'm sure Souji has to buy him new jeans all the time these days. XD

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Re: Souji/Yosuke D/s 7/7 anonymous October 15 2010, 01:43:03 UTC
ffffffu-- it's like everything on the kink meme lately is just hitting buttons I didn't know I had.

this was amazing, writer!anon. ♥

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Re: Souji/Yosuke D/s 7/7 anonymous October 15 2010, 03:42:37 UTC
Hooooly fucking balls, writer!anon. This was... beyond amazing. So real.

I cried, negl [happy tears, of course~] Sobbed like a fucking baby~ It was just THAT awesome. Like, I can't place enough emphasis on how REAL this is. It's so hard to find a D/s fic that lives up to the real thing. The love behind all the violence~ You did that so perfectly. Any time I ever have to explain D/s and the relationship behind it to anyone, I'm linking them this fic.

And not to mention it was hot as all fuck! 8D

This sub tips her hat to you, good writer!anon~ ♥

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writer!anon anonymous October 17 2010, 00:23:18 UTC
And this switch tips her hat right back at you, in thanks for your lovely comment. &hearts

I'm really happy you liked it so much. Warms my heart. :)

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Re: Souji/Yosuke D/s 7/7 anonymous October 15 2010, 08:32:15 UTC
That was glorious, anon. Simply glorious.

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Re: Souji/Yosuke D/s 7/7 anonymous October 15 2010, 10:53:01 UTC
Yeah, what all of these other people said. Hot, sweet, and all-around amazing; you nabbed the dynamics of D/S straight on, auth!non. FUKKEN' SAVED

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Re: Souji/Yosuke D/s 7/7 anonymous October 15 2010, 16:14:09 UTC
Holy hell! First time I've read a d/s story and I must say I like it! Great work.

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Re: Souji/Yosuke D/s 7/7 anonymous October 16 2010, 11:24:55 UTC
OMG that was the hottest thing I have ever read.

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Re: Souji/Yosuke D/s 7/7 anonymous October 17 2010, 03:03:02 UTC
*APPLAUDS* This was EXCELLENT. Best d/s fic I've read in... maybe ever? You captured everything so well.

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Re: Souji/Yosuke D/s 7/7 ext_453989 April 6 2015, 14:38:00 UTC
really amazing and hot and sweet even when souji is being sadistic

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