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Feb 10, 2010 02:23

Stars and garters above! Isn't it time for a new post? The last one is just so... big now, isn't it? I don't know if even I could take it... ♥

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART FIVEAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly ( Read more... )

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I'll show you mine 9/10 anonymous October 10 2010, 03:15:48 UTC
There were times when Yosuke ran his mouth and Souji wanted nothing more than to gag him with whatever was at hand; times he shouldn’t even be able to talk - bitching and moaning after a battle inside the TV world while being so injured he couldn’t move; teasing Souji about things that should just not be mentioned in public - in public; babbling about a song he couldn’t get out of his head while Souji did his damndest to get his clothes off and his cock in his mouth. But this, this was one of the times Souji loved the non-existent barrier between Yosuke’s brain and his mouth. His words made Souji soar. “Tell me again…”

Yosuke turned his head back to rest on his forearms. “More…”

Souji realized his hands were shaking, just as his hips were rocking lightly. He hadn’t even noticed before. “Again…”

Yosuke groaned quietly. “Please, partner. More.”

Souji closed his eyes, his head slipping until he rested his forehead on Yosuke’s thigh. He couldn’t muster anything more than a whisper. “Tell me…”

“Lick me.”

“Fucking hell…” Yosuke was right, it could hardly get any more intimate than this and he couldn’t think of a thing that demanded more trust and Yosuke let him. Yosuke let him spread him open and taste him and he did just that, lifted his head and kissed Yosuke there - kissed him; brushed his lips over puckered skin and sucked lightly on it, let his tongue slip out as he would if he was kissing Yosuke’s mouth, sliding it back and forth before pushing inside, and he did, he let the tip of his tongue enter Yosuke and when Yosuke moaned, pushed back, he made his tongue pointier and pushed as much of it as he could inside, his face mashed against Yosuke’s ass, his lips parted wide and wet, covering as much as they could as he fucked him.

And how he fucked him. Pushing his tongue into Yosuke over and over and over, letting out choked little moans and digging his fingers hard into quivering muscle and Yosuke kept pushing back, whispering his name or God’s name or evoking demons and devils or babbling, asking for more, more, more.

It ended up with Souji pushing, pulling with his hands, not knowing how but managing to get Yosuke up on his knees, head still resting on his forearms, making his back arch just beautifully and now Souji could reach between Yosuke’s trembling legs; cup his balls, wrap his hand around his cock and squeeze and just hope no one would wake up when Yosuke gave a surprised shout, thankfully half-muffled by a pillow.

He kissed his way down until he could suck and lick at Yosuke’s taint again, making sure to push and prod best he could, hoping Yosuke would be sensitive enough. And he was. This time Souji could hear him bite the pillow as he groaned loudly and bucked and Souji let his free hand stay there, keeping a steady pressure with three fingertips against the sensitive area as he went back to tongue fucking him. Not in his wildest dreams would he have imagined he’d get this reaction. He’d hoped Yosuke would like it but never dared think he would actually love it - go crazy from it - push back and fuck himself on Souji’s tongue.

Souji found himself wishing he had three hands. He didn’t want to let up his grip on Yosuke’s cock or the constant external pressure on his prostate but he desperately needed to jerk off. His cock bobbed with every heartbeat; there were dark little spots on the futon between his thighs where drops of precome had landed; his balls ached.

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I'll show you mine 10/10 anonymous October 10 2010, 03:17:20 UTC
It was as if Yosuke had read his thoughts when he just moments later reached between his legs and pushed Souji’s hand out of the way, grabbed his cock and started working it; fast, jerky tugs that told Souji he’d come any second. He took himself in hand and jolted at the sensation. He’d been so lost in Yosuke he’d all but forgotten about himself. Being reminded of the state he was in had been shocking. Touching himself was almost too much. He nipped at a buttock, steeling himself not to moan loudly and it wasn’t until he was sure he had himself under control and wouldn’t wake the entire house he put his tongue back on Yosuke; lapped and fucked and sucked so loudly the sounds of Yosuke gasping and swearing were nearly drowned out. He didn’t hear when he started coming - but he felt it, felt Yosuke’s asshole clench rhythmically around the tip of his tongue and it was enough for him to tip over the edge as well. His fingers slipped from Yosuke’s taint so he could stop himself from falling over while soiling his futon, his orgasm taking him over and making him forget to work his tongue. He just pressed lips and nose against Yosuke and groaned between clenched teeth and let pleasure ride him like a bitch for however long it wanted.

xXx

Souji came to when Yosuke collapsed, making Souji drop with him, landing half-draped across his back with an ‘oof’.

“Holy shit,” Yosuke said.

Well put. Souji grunted in agreement while gathering the strength needed to climb up Yosuke’s body and flop down next to him.

“I admit it, I’m still freaked out. I still think it’s fucking weird and I’m not sure I’m cool with how sticky I am right now, but holy shit.”

Souji managed a chuckle and cupped Yosuke’s cheek in a weak hand. He supposed he could move in for a kiss - he really wanted to, but he suspected it wouldn’t be appreciated. Not with where his tongue had been. “Told you it would-mmph!”

Yosuke pressed his lips hard against Souji’s, just long enough for Souji to press back, before he broke it and let his head fall back on a pillow damp with sweat. “I don’t know what to say, man. You’ll have to make do with that.”

“I can live with that.” Souji let the hand on Yosuke’s cheek travel up into his hair, gently brushing it from his face.

Yosuke made a content little noise in the back of his throat. “A fucking miracle we didn’t wake anyone up, by the way.”

“As far as we know…”

“Ah, yeah.”

Souji stretched out on his back, still keeping his hand in Yosuke’s hair and more or less forcing him to rest his head on Souji’s chest. “I haven’t forgotten, you know.”

“Forgotten what?”

“My part of the deal.”

“Oh.” Yosuke squirmed lightly, pressing up tighter against Souji’s side.

“I was just wondering…”

At this Yosuke lifted his head and met Souji’s gaze. He was still red-cheeked and a bit glassy-eyed.

“Do you want to combine it with me putting on that skirt?”

Yosuke gaped, his eyes suddenly a lot more alert. “I-uh…”

“I thought it might go well together.” Souji smiled a little. He could practically see the cogs turn in Yosuke’s head, his post orgasmic mind trying to grasp the concept of putting two of his hottest fantasies together.

It took Yosuke a minute to find his voice again. “Y-you’re unbelievable.”

“Just practical. Figured we might get both over with at the same time.” He found it harder than usual to keep a straight face. He was just too comfortable where he was, even though he was starting to feel sticky and gross.

Yosuke let out an exasperated sigh. “You’re an idiot too.”

“A practical idiot.” He couldn’t - he felt the grin he’d been trying to hold back break through and nearly split his face in two. “Who would love to get fucked in a skirt. I guess we should add perverted.”

“A practical, perverted idiot. Yeah, sounds like you, alright.” Yosuke smiled back while shaking his head. ”Now go brush your teeth. I want to kiss you again.”

end~

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OP anonymous October 10 2010, 03:43:00 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Oh, Anon. This was. Was. Jesus. I don't. My words.

Hottest thing I've seen in weeks. You are a god.

Seriously, not only did you get in some AMAZING rimming, you also got tons of other awesome kinkiness in there and I loved every bit of it. You even read my mind re: the trust involved! Honestly, when Yosuke started babbling on about how it felt...man, it's like you lifted a section of my brain and copy pasted it right into the story. So wonderful. The trust/intimacy end of indulging in a partner's kinks is honestly probably my favorite part about them. You are wonderful djgkasldgsgajs thank you so much.

I can't get enough of this. Seriously, you are wonderful. Fuck, I want to read about the next time they get together too. YOU'RE WONDERFUL, THANK YOU SO MUCH, NO I'M NOT A BROKEN RECORD.

Also, yes, as long as there's space to comment (the comment limit is 10,000), it's meme proticol to post stories under the original prompts! marukyurevue takes all the fills throughout each part and archives them daily at ~12AM PST!

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Authornon anonymous October 14 2010, 17:02:27 UTC
<3<3<3 So glad you liked it, anon. After reading it through again I realized it REALLY needs another edit and I felt bad for posting it before I was 100% ok with it, but all I wanted really was for the OP to be happy with it so... I guess my mission is accomplished. :D

Also, thanks for clearing the meme protocol up for me! Good to know. :)

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Re: I'll show you mine 10/10 anonymous October 10 2010, 04:51:54 UTC
I... I didn't even know I could get off to this, but holy shit yes.

Ahah, and just to make things worse? Souji being the one getting fucked is unreasonably attractive to me, and I've spent longer than I care to revisit being irritated at the fact that his culture festival outfit wasn't really the most accessible when compared to Yosuke's, meaning that most things could have one or the other, but not both. Hotter than hell, that whole middling bit. God how bad I'd love to see that.

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Authornon anonymous October 14 2010, 17:05:45 UTC
Agreed and agreed. Souji getting fucked is hot as hell and his culture festival costume was a disappointment. Figured I could fix both of those thoughts in one go. Or the idea of it, at least. I don't have any plans on writing it but... Ah well, should never say never. The thought refuses to leave my head.

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Re: I'll show you mine 10/10 anonymous October 11 2010, 14:58:52 UTC
This - is - the - hottest - asjfs;dfdf

I was so happy when I opened this link and saw that it was ten parts long. For something we haven't had much (or any?) of on the meme, I can't tell you how thrilled I was to see it done so skillfully and fabulously. afsdfd I just don't know. Yosuke's position on the futon is just killing me here. HOT BEYOND ALL WORDS, ANON, GOOD JOB. &hearts

And add me to the pile of people who find Souji getting fucked very, very attractive. Just in case we're taking a census.

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Writer!anon anonymous October 14 2010, 17:10:59 UTC
:D Thank you!
When I see fills to kinky prompts that are long, or at least more than three parts, I always get so happy, so I wanted to do just that and hopefully makes other anons happy too. :) I succeeded! Feels awesome.

yes yes yes yes god yes so hot.

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Re: I'll show you mine 10/10 anonymous October 11 2010, 15:39:10 UTC
Please wait a minute or two before I compose myself again after reading such an amazing fill. Haha, seriously anon! Your OP is very lucky (:

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Re: I'll show you mine 10/10 anonymous October 11 2010, 22:47:01 UTC
Oh... well... nutbunnies. I think I just fell in love, man.r

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Re: I'll show you mine 10/10 anonymous October 12 2010, 01:24:40 UTC
not just smut, but IN CHARACTER smut. i applaud you, anon. especially for filling a prompt on a kink that we see so little of on here

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writer!anon anonymous October 15 2010, 14:11:27 UTC
Dude, that means a lot to me. I'm still kinda new to writing P4, so hearing I managed to nail the boys' characters really warms my heart. Thank you. &hearts

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Re: I'll show you mine 10/10 anonymous October 15 2010, 18:29:39 UTC
rgdlkhdklhdjsdgsh...! I haven't read a rimming fic this good in AGES. Dayum, anon. Nice work.

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