Theme: Week 1

[alienashi]

FIRST KISS

Here we go. Rules are here for your references. Happy writing!

Please include anything that you would prefer not/don't want to see written for your prompts (if any).

Comments

[sarcasmmonster]

His lips were chapped, he simply pressed down on her with this gentle pressure that she did enjoy, he was not assertive or aggressive, but his strong, long nose continuously hit into hers like it had a mind of its own and that mind wanted to do battle with her snub nose. It was bothersome really. His eyes were closed, and so were hers, and when her hands found their own merry ways to his chest, she simply felt stranger. When she began to press back, out of her initial shock, she was rewarded with a tighter grip and a satisfied smirk. She had never, this had never...

This, this was new and old and ugly and beautiful, all at once. This wasn't simply any girl being kissed by any boy, oh no, this was Inoue Orihime, survivor and lover, being kissed by Kurosaki Ichigo, protector and fighter.

And though, though they were unable to stand on their own two feet alone, though they were only just beginning to show the depth of their concern for the other, they felt as if, as if, this kiss, this awkward, weird thing that had surprised them both, this little show of affection was only the beginning of their tale.

I hope you like it! Cult classic interchangeable with dorky movie reference?

[enelya87]

HOW MUCH DO I LOVE THIS! LET ME TELL YOU! I can't. I'm out of words. But I love it! Well I have a couple of words: The bits about her thoughts on him carrying her and the actual -wonderfully awkward- kiss itself were the best parts for me, but I loved all of it! *reads it again*

Lizzy

[sarcasmmonster]

Why, thank you! It's so nice to hear (...read?) that you liked what I wrote! What a compliment, it coming from you! :)

(Yeah, it's me. My internet wouldn't survive me logging in so I must resort to the anonymity that livejournal occasionally provides. Yeah. XD)

[codegal182]

Chapped lips FTW. Enjoyed the descriptions in this, especially at the beginning with the hair ruffles and shoulder squeezes that Ichigo uses to show his affection. That had me squeeing. *___*

[sarcasmmonster]

IKR. Thank you so much! I think I pretty much suck at describing things, but I'm really glad you liked it regardless!

[godmodsue]

ROCKY HORROR SHOW, YESSSSS. Definitely a-okay with the interchangeability, love! *3*

Thanks so much for this! I love how you described Orihime's beating heart (the judge, hee!), the inclusion of Tatsuki, and of course, the kiss itself. And HAHA, I really do love the reference! Then Orihime's jump to Ichigo and Riff-Raff. Oh, bless.

I hope you can fill in other prompts in the future, too! And thanks SO much for participation~ ♥

[sarcasmmonster]

Haha, glad you approve!

Thanks so much for the compliment! (The judge part, I realised I meant to put 'ferocity' and as such, I have fallen victim to spelling fail D:)

I plan to, don't worry! It shall be oodles of fun.

[godmodsue]

Totally approves! *thumbs-up*

And since this is a totally late reply, I'm really glad to see how much you're participating here, love! *hug* I hope you're having fun while writing so much, hehe.

By the way, I'll be pimping these fills over at ichi_hime (and at the FLOL thread too), so do you mind if I ask for a title? No need for ratings or a summary, I just need a title to separate all the fills. Hope that's not a bother.

And thanks again for filling this! :D

[sarcasmmonster]

I'm having a great time, yeah! It's quite fun to post stories, and it gives me practice.

Yeah, sure thing!

Um...title...how about, "Not Like Days Before"? Lame as that is...

[songsparrw1]

Richly written! Love your stuff.