Fic: Belongs To You Chapter 11/20

[backrose_17]

Title: Belongs to you
Fandoms: Torchwood/Doctor Who
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto, Doctor/Luna, ?/Tosh, ?/Donna, Rhys/Gwen, pre-Rhys/Kathy, Andy/?, Tom/Martha and Owen/? with past Michael/Luna, Jack/Luna/Ianto friendship and mentions of Doctor/Rose
Summary: In the year that never was the members of Torchwood Three lived different lives, now those

Comments

[blucougar]

OMG, I don't have words for how satisfying that was!

What a brilliant chapter, and hooray! for Jack for finally saying everything to Gwen that he should have said from the first. I worry, though - the red-head at the end was Adam, right? I dread to think how he might mess with Jack and Ianto's happiness, not to mention potentially giving Gwen another foot in the door.

Excellent chapter, as always.

[backrose_17]

I'm glad you liked it.

This is what I really wished Jack would have said to Gwen, I will never understand why he let her get away with everything. Yes that was Adam at the end. I don't want to give away anything but there are safeguards in place to make sure Adam gets nowhere near Jack and Ianto. My take on Adam is going to go a little different.

Thank you.

[jsks]

Love this chapter.

[backrose_17]

Glad to hear that.

[bluelilacs]

That was bloody Fantastic! Jack's slap-down was waaay overdue, and you gave Ianto his chance to knock her off her high horse, too. Yay! The arrogance pouring off of her made me want to reach in and cold-cock her myself.

As I've said before, Adam, if that is who the red-head who's watching them is, always gave me the creeps. I didn't stop to think though, till blucougar mentioned it, that this might just play right into Gwen's hands, if they don't get rid of her before he makes his move. I hope the "others" keep a close eye on what's happening.

[backrose_17]

Glad you liked it. Jack's slap-down was way overdue and I really enjoyed writing it. My Ianto muse demanded he get a shot in at Gwen.

It is Adam but I have a plan in place to keep him far away from Jack, Ianto, Tosh and Owen. Gwen on the other hand is going to be wide open to fall into Adam's hands but trust me it will not end well for either of them. And the "others" will play a very important role in the upcoming chapters.

[duochan_maxwell]

oooooh, Adam is showing up! Gods, this is going to be messy! Can't wait for it, though

[backrose_17]

Adam is indeed on the scene and set to cause trouble but everything will work out in the end.

[reddevilpoes]

exit Gwen...Hurray

[backrose_17]

Gwen is on her way out, now all she has to do is tell Rhys.