Collapse: 3/?

[backporchpoet]

Title: Collapse
Author: backporchpoet
Pairing: Pepper/Tony
Rating: PG-13 just to be safe.
Length: 2,414 words - Part III in a series. (You can find Part I and Part II here.)
Summary: AU. Tony quite literally drags Pepper along for the Jericho demonstration in Afghanistan. For Pepper, things just keep getting worse.
Note: Not beta'd. Still looking for one. I

Comments

[lizbet0]

Wow! This is very vivid and very powerful! I'm looking forward to where you go with it!

(I'll comment tomorrow with specifics and any typos I may come across. I try to read once through for the story before I start picking out parts. *grin*)

[ria_oaks]

Eek! Poor Tony and Pepper. :( Can't wait to see what happens when they presumably wake up in the cave...

[alchemistc]

Oh man. The images in this are so striking, I almost feel disoriented myself.

I will be eagerly awaiting more of this.

[curls]

OMG! I've been wondering about this story! I'm so excited that it's popped up again. I can't wait to read the next part! :D

[eumelia]

Oooooh, this is getting intense!

I can't wait for more.