FIC: Clockworks and Cold Steel (Heroes)

[bachlava]

Comments

[h0pefulregret]

This is my first time reading a Noah/Lauren fic and I have to say that I really, really enjoyed this. I love how it wasn't all just smut, and the way you worked in his memories of Sandra and the life he once had with the new one he's now facing.

Wonderful writing. I will definitely be bookmarking this to re-read in the future!

[bachlava]

I'm so glad you liked it! I'm definitely a fan of Noah having a bit of fun in a non-PWP-ish way... Many thanks for reading, and for your kind words.

[tokenblkgirl]

Oh, I loved this! ♥

[bachlava]

Glad to hear it - many thanks!

[zelda_zee]

This is such an awesome fic. You always put so much into your fic that goes beyond pairings and sex. Great characterization and realistic responses and emotions make this, and your other stories, quite unique.

[bachlava]

Aww, thanks. You're very kind - and this fic wouldn't be what it is without your help! Many thanks due there as well - now if only I could work in kitten!fic... ;)

[eternal_moonie]

woohoo!!! Totally AWESOME story!!! Totally love Noah/Lauren!

[bachlava]

Glad you liked it - many thanks!

[themaskedmckay]

I love your Noah voice. This was a really good look into the life he's living post-divorce; the life the show only hints at.

The end with the puzzle was poignant and very interesting to me as Noah really seems to need/define himself by the lady at his side.

[bachlava]

Glad you liked it! I really do think Noah defined himself as company man and as a family man and has lost both, or at least been greatly destabilized. It will be interesting to see where that goes.

Thanks so much for reading, and for your kind words!