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[bacchae23]

These fifteen minute fics are really fun. Quite a workout.

Title: The Bomb and the Park
Fandom/Original: Original
Characters: Myra Considine
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 548
Time Taken: 15:23 (and then about three minutes of small editing and tweaking).
A/N: Hope you enjoy.

She knows instinctively that this is a death wish.

...at this point, though,

Comments

[lazaefair]

Nice! I like the development of background, unfolding without exposition dump.

I need to get back into 15-minute fics...or at least drabbles. Or something.

[bacchae23]

Please do. It's always nice to see you write.

[suckmyspock]

Just floated in from 15_minute_fic, and I just had to say that I really liked this piece. I enjoyed the way you built up to the scene, and I really liked the repition of the "isn't exactly human" -- it added a lot to it.

Very nice!

[super_six_one]

I liked this. Very interesting. :D