86th. 24th. A Bowl of Soup

[babyluw]

This is the second story that I, writerx75 and spikykun wrote together :D
This one I started, Spikykun did the middle and WriterX finished. I'm guessing that you guys all know what game I'm talking' 'bout, if not, you can go here and read the most about it. AND, if you havn't already read it (which you shuld have, cuz it's fuckin awesome!) you can go HERE to

Comments

[babyluw]

Thank you honey~~<3

[writerx75]

You're right - this does feel weird to comment on something I contributed to! XD I have to say, though, when I read what you and Spiky wrote for this, it about took my breath away. As always, the way you express yourself just spun my head around, and Spiky's yummy smexy scene was...well, it took me a while to pick the thread up, but I think it all worked out for a good story. I'm so proud of us, seeing the second one up, too! :D I think we did a good job, co-author!

[babyluw]

I know xD
Wow, thank you, as always U_U I know, the smex is awesome~ the ending is pretty damn cool too. You put a smile on my face really with the hand on the cock xD
Yeah, I had a hard time too to start typing on the one Spiky started, I was like "oh my, this needs at least 40 pages before I can finish it..." but it worked out fine in the end ^^

We must have done an awesome job since people seems to be intrested in joining the next turn :D

[writerx75]

So glad you liked how it all wound up...I was pretty concerned at first, because it had been years since I'd written in first person...and then, later, when I was about halfway through what I'd planned to write and realized I'd written it in the wrong tense. ;_;

Heh, heh...glad you liked that bit...for some reason, it just seemed totally right. :D

I just loved how you wrapped up the one that Spiky started...just the right amount of sweet and hot...I can't wait to see it posted! I think she was talking about posting it soon (Monday-ish), so maybe we'll get to enjoy the finished version soon.

I know - it's so exciting! I think that's just what Spiky said was going to happen, too. XD

[my_imaginating]

.... you three are giving me smutty renichi dreams....

........ and i DEFINITELY LIKE IT. <3

[babyluw]

oh, that's sweet, I ALSO WANT THEM IN MY DREAMS! WHY CAN'T I HAVE 'EM?!!!?

[babyluw]

Thank you~~ <3

[lnasados]

TAKING A COLD SHOWER NOW! Ohh yeah. This was AWSOME!

[babyluw]

Haha, awesome. Thank you