Two updates in at once, yay! Wow there was a lot of volatile emotions in this but considering what she went through and the protective automated defenses she's created since childhood, I can see Chloe reacting this way. Forcing herself to be clinical and hard with him. Let your guard down once is a mistake, twice you're the fool. :D I like that he's coming clean, that he's taking a huge risk by telling her everything, it proves not only how sorry he is but how much he does value her friendship. I actually thought she had her taser in her pocket, the gun was truly frightening but I guess shows just how afraid she is.
"Wow there was a lot of volatile emotions in this but considering what she went through and the protective automated defenses she's created since childhood, I can see Chloe reacting this way. Forcing herself to be clinical and hard with him. Let your guard down once is a mistake, twice you're the fool."
It's like you live in my head, sometimes! You're exactly right; the challenge will be getting them back to being friends after something so nasty has happened. I have a plan; Ijust hope it'll work!
"I like that he's coming clean, that he's taking a huge risk by telling her everything, it proves not only how sorry he is but how much he does value her friendship."
It's certainly going to be a rough day for both of them; Clark most especially because he had to 'fess up to his folks all that happened, and now he has to face his victim and see the trauma he's created. :-(
"I actually thought she had her taser in her pocket, the gun was truly frightening but I guess shows just how afraid
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"I'm sorry, but Clark needs to go to jail. At the very least he should have to lose Chloe. Not all stories have to have a happy ending, and even if Chloe knows and understands what was wrong with Clark, there's just no way she can forgive that."
Well, if I packed his arse off to the pokey, there wouldn't really be much of a story, now, would there? ;-)
"He raped her. OMG, he so needs to pay for this for the rest of his life."
It's a horiffic crime, one that he definitely needs to pay for. We'll see how it all works out.
"She may grudgingly forgive some day, but she can't possibly want to be with him, ever. I just can't imagine that."
Yeah...that's the challenging part. The very, very challenging part. :-/
"Frankly, I want him in kryptonite stocks, covered in honey and bees set loose on his naked body to get stung over and over grrrrr..."
Ai-ai-ai! That hurts just reading about it! :-O
"You've made me really hate Clark, LOL."And now I have to fix it, get him back to the warm, caring young man we all loved. Wish me luck
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Wow, what a great update. I find it hard to believe Chloe can ever forgive him, but then again she's got a huge heart and the circumstances are more than a little odd. At least she's willing to hear him out.
Chloe's certainly bending over backwards to save Clark from a criminal record. I don't doubt that she'd turn him in if his explanation doesn't cut it; but I think she needs to know why. Like you said, the circumstances were odd, and she's lived in Smallville long enough to know the score.
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Wheee!!!! LOL!
"Wow there was a lot of volatile emotions in this but considering what she went through and the protective automated defenses she's created since childhood, I can see Chloe reacting this way. Forcing herself to be clinical and hard with him. Let your guard down once is a mistake, twice you're the fool."
It's like you live in my head, sometimes! You're exactly right; the challenge will be getting them back to being friends after something so nasty has happened. I have a plan; Ijust hope it'll work!
"I like that he's coming clean, that he's taking a huge risk by telling her everything, it proves not only how sorry he is but how much he does value her friendship."
It's certainly going to be a rough day for both of them; Clark most especially because he had to 'fess up to his folks all that happened, and now he has to face his victim and see the trauma he's created. :-(
"I actually thought she had her taser in her pocket, the gun was truly frightening but I guess shows just how afraid ( ... )
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*blinks*
Okay wow... that just threw me for a loop. But in a good way. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat... literally. lol
Can't wait for the next update!
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Well, if I packed his arse off to the pokey, there wouldn't really be much of a story, now, would there? ;-)
"He raped her. OMG, he so needs to pay for this for the rest of his life."
It's a horiffic crime, one that he definitely needs to pay for. We'll see how it all works out.
"She may grudgingly forgive some day, but she can't possibly want to be with him, ever. I just can't imagine that."
Yeah...that's the challenging part. The very, very challenging part. :-/
"Frankly, I want him in kryptonite stocks, covered in honey and bees set loose on his naked body to get stung over and over grrrrr..."
Ai-ai-ai! That hurts just reading about it! :-O
"You've made me really hate Clark, LOL."And now I have to fix it, get him back to the warm, caring young man we all loved. Wish me luck ( ... )
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Glad you liked it, Jen! :-)
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