So glad to see another chapter from you!!! And I really loved how you changed some of the Checkmate events around - I wasn't too fond of Clark's way of getting information from Tess in the episode.
but... *grumbles* more freaking waiting!! Asking to wait and to be patient. *yeah, I'm still grumbling*
but it will be in the next chapter, I promise you!!!
You pinky swear, cross your heart and all that?????
Hmmm, I liked the change you did with both Clark and Oliver interrogating Tess. And Oliver about to step over the line and be pulled back by Clark. And Tess taking everything in and seeing what she could use in the future!!!
“I did not abandon her!” Clark said heatedly.
Ahh, yeah you did, you douche!!! Remember how you walked out on her when she was breaking down and needed you the most. But you decided that humanity wasn't worth it.
“Didn’t you?” she challenged. “You left your greatest asset vulnerable.”
Not only his greatest asset but his best friend!!! Asshole!!!
Oliver frowned as he watched several emotions cross Clark’s face all at once. It was the first time in several months that he was convinced that Clark Kent still had a heart. Still
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"but... *grumbles* more freaking waiting!! Asking to wait and to be patient. *yeah, I'm still grumbling*"
Aw, you won't be grumbling when the next chapter comes along, babes - trust me! ;-)
Unless, of course, I decide to throw in another evil cliffie...*ducks*
"You pinky swear, cross your heart and all that?????"
Pinky Promise, etc etc etc. :-D
"Hmmm, I liked the change you did with both Clark and Oliver interrogating Tess. And Oliver about to step over the line and be pulled back by Clark. And Tess taking everything in and seeing what she could use in the future!!!"
I think the episode makes a whole lot more sense this way (and it works into my story perfectly, to boot!) :-P
"“I did not abandon her!” Clark said heatedly.
Ahh, yeah you did, you douche!!! Remember how you walked out on her when she was breaking down and needed you the most. But you decided that humanity wasn't worth it."
Too right. Selfish bastard. :-(
"Not only his greatest asset but his best friend!!! Asshole!!!"Hmm...not too fond of Season 9 Clark
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Glad you liked it! :)
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Glad you like it, Stacy!
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Hi there Miss Evil Cliffy Queen!
Another AWESOME chapter honey!
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Er...still no Sexy Tiems *ducks flying missiles*
but... *grumbles* more freaking waiting!! Asking to wait and to be patient. *yeah, I'm still grumbling*
but it will be in the next chapter, I promise you!!!
You pinky swear, cross your heart and all that?????
Hmmm, I liked the change you did with both Clark and Oliver interrogating Tess. And Oliver about to step over the line and be pulled back by Clark. And Tess taking everything in and seeing what she could use in the future!!!
“I did not abandon her!” Clark said heatedly.
Ahh, yeah you did, you douche!!! Remember how you walked out on her when she was breaking down and needed you the most. But you decided that humanity wasn't worth it.
“Didn’t you?” she challenged. “You left your greatest asset vulnerable.”
Not only his greatest asset but his best friend!!! Asshole!!!
Oliver frowned as he watched several emotions cross Clark’s face all at once. It was the first time in several months that he was convinced that Clark Kent still had a heart. Still ( ... )
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Aw, you won't be grumbling when the next chapter comes along, babes - trust me! ;-)
Unless, of course, I decide to throw in another evil cliffie...*ducks*
"You pinky swear, cross your heart and all that?????"
Pinky Promise, etc etc etc. :-D
"Hmmm, I liked the change you did with both Clark and Oliver interrogating Tess. And Oliver about to step over the line and be pulled back by Clark. And Tess taking everything in and seeing what she could use in the future!!!"
I think the episode makes a whole lot more sense this way (and it works into my story perfectly, to boot!) :-P
"“I did not abandon her!” Clark said heatedly.
Ahh, yeah you did, you douche!!! Remember how you walked out on her when she was breaking down and needed you the most. But you decided that humanity wasn't worth it."
Too right. Selfish bastard. :-(
"Not only his greatest asset but his best friend!!! Asshole!!!"Hmm...not too fond of Season 9 Clark ( ... )
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