Really enjoyed Chloe being jealous. And even though I wish Chloe's plan for make up sex had gone through, I like that she's doing "couple things" with Oliver besides hot steamy sex...
Well... Maybe I am, I don't know, I miss the smut...
Oh, don't worry, Sly. The smut will return, but I want it to come back with a 'bang' (heh!), hence certain developments you'll see in the next chapter. You know I won't withhold good nookie from y'all without good reason! ;)
Hi Babydee, love I so adore this fic, sexy, edgy and now so bloody sweet! I'm glad you addressed Chloe's uncertainty about her looks compared to the other women that Ollie has dated and the answer he gave just stole my heart, sniffles! I can't wait till he talks about this to her and hope she fully believes him and understands that she's beautiful and sexy and it's just been the idiots, especially one big alien idiot, who've pushed her aside for the two 'L' girls! Sorry no offence to CK and the 'L'girls' fans but the way tptb have written Chloe's interactions with men has been atrocious and I love it when Ollie makes Chloe feel like a woman
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"Hi Babydee, love I so adore this fic, sexy, edgy and now so bloody sweet!"
Oh, thank you, hun! *hugs*
" I'm glad you addressed Chloe's uncertainty about her looks compared to the other women that Ollie has dated and the answer he gave just stole my heart, sniffles!"
I'm so pleased you like it. ;-)
"I can't wait till he talks about this to her and hope she fully believes him and understands that she's beautiful and sexy and it's just been the idiots, especially one big alien idiot, who've pushed her aside for the two 'L' girls!"
I know. This show isn't too nice to blondes, is it? LOL!
"One of my dream scenes is that Chloe, Lois and Lana are at a party or something like that and Ollie comes in (he doesn't know them yet) and the girls all drool when they see him and Ollie goes straight for Chloe. I'd love to read about all four's reactions, wish I could write this but my arthritis stops me, so hint hint Babydee, I'd would so love it if you were to put type to doc and deliver me this wish!"Wow! I could give it a shot but it's
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I dont usually like to comment cuz Im a really horrible typer and it takes me forever and a day just to say 'awesome'. But I read part 9, and I want part 10, cuz your story is so epically awesome that I can't wait to read more...its like crack, I'm addicted!
"I dont usually like to comment cuz Im a really horrible typer and it takes me forever and a day just to say 'awesome'. But I read part 9, and I want part 10, cuz your story is so epically awesome that I can't wait to read more...its like crack, I'm addicted!"
*gasps* Oh, that is just the best complement EVER!!! :-D
Thanks so much for delurking, wobblyheadbob - it means the world to me! :-D
"I love Chloe but I wanted to smack her when she suggested to Oliver to sample the local cuisine!!! Bad Chloe, bad!!!! No suggesting this blasphemy!!!!"
I can't stop laughing, this cracked me up so much! :-D
"OMG the image of Chloe and Oliver dancing to Jai Ho is just so lovely!!!"
Isn't it just? *sigh*
So glad yo like it, purple moon - and the next chapter is all yours! :-)
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Well... Maybe I am, I don't know, I miss the smut...
Lol--nah, I enjoy it all. Great chapter hun!
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Thanks for commenting, babes!
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“That’s because we’re weird that way” made me laugh. And Ollie getting pissed about Chloe's suggesting he date other women = awesome.
*drumming fingers impatiently for next chapter*
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Yay! :-D
"“That’s because we’re weird that way” made me laugh. And Ollie getting pissed about Chloe's suggesting he date other women = awesome."
Poor Oliver, having to try so hard to win over one stubborn female! :-)
Glad you like it, fickery! And the next chapter's all posted now. :-)
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Oh, thank you, hun! *hugs*
" I'm glad you addressed Chloe's uncertainty about her looks compared to the other women that Ollie has dated and the answer he gave just stole my heart, sniffles!"
I'm so pleased you like it. ;-)
"I can't wait till he talks about this to her and hope she fully believes him and understands that she's beautiful and sexy and it's just been the idiots, especially one big alien idiot, who've pushed her aside for the two 'L' girls!"
I know. This show isn't too nice to blondes, is it? LOL!
"One of my dream scenes is that Chloe, Lois and Lana are at a party or something like that and Ollie comes in (he doesn't know them yet) and the girls all drool when they see him and Ollie goes straight for Chloe. I'd love to read about all four's reactions, wish I could write this but my arthritis stops me, so hint hint Babydee, I'd would so love it if you were to put type to doc and deliver me this wish!"Wow! I could give it a shot but it's ( ... )
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*gasps* Oh, that is just the best complement EVER!!! :-D
Thanks so much for delurking, wobblyheadbob - it means the world to me! :-D
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OMG the image of Chloe and Oliver dancing to Jai Ho is just so lovely!!!
Next chapter, please!!!!
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I can't stop laughing, this cracked me up so much! :-D
"OMG the image of Chloe and Oliver dancing to Jai Ho is just so lovely!!!"
Isn't it just? *sigh*
So glad yo like it, purple moon - and the next chapter is all yours! :-)
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