Chlark Fanfic: Right in Front of You, Ch 2

[babydee1]

Rating: PG (for now!) ;-)

Timescale:    Sometime after Fierce

Disclaimer:    All characters belong to the CW & DC Comics

Comments

[simplytoopretty]

Ooo, that was an awesome chapter! I really adored how there were little insights into what Chloe and Clark were both thinking. I liked that they talked, especially the bit about growing up and changes. And the end of the chapter was great.

This line I loved: So the mace and taser could continue enjoying their happy night in the drawer. It amused me in a very good way.

[babydee1]

Hee! Do you own mace & a taser by any chance, STP?

Thanks for the feedback!

[margroks]

And I didn't mention earlier how much I love the alteration so that we never have to endure the appalling Clana sex of Wrath. I am profoundly greatful for that! Can't we have this Clark on the show? Please?

[babydee1]

You're welcome! ;-) And thanks for the feedback!

Sadly,the Wrath Clanaquakes are still part of mainstream SV history, but whenever you want to retcon it out of existence, this fic is always here!

[chloista4ever]

cool loved clarks resolution in this chapter! :)

[babydee1]

Me too! Now if only we could get this one on the show...

[sue_denim]

Oh, geez--Clark can be so romantic.

[babydee1]

Who knew?! :-)

[wwg23]

Aww. That was sweet. Clark is a charmer when he's not moping. :)

[babydee1]

I just had to get rid of the Lana-mope factor. It was driving me nuts!