Comments | babydee1: Chlex Fanfic: Orchestrato, Chapter 16

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Chlex Fanfic: Orchestrato, Chapter 16

Aug 16, 2013 22:48

Title:              Orchestrato
Author: BabyDee1
Pairing:          Chlex
Rating:           PG13 for now, NC-17 later
Warnings:     Some chronology-shifting with the events of Episode 4.1 (Gone)
Timeline:      Safehouse Summer of Love, End of Season 3/Beginning of 4
Disclaimer:   All characters belong to the CW & DC comics.
Summary:     Lex ( Read more... )

rated:pg13, smallville, chloe, orchestrato, fanfic, chlex, lex

Comments 11

eternal_moonie August 16 2013, 22:22:06 UTC

WOOHOO!!!!!

*Cuddles You/Shows You Lurve*

ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!

babydee1 August 17 2013, 07:04:01 UTC

Thankee very kindly, Moonie! ;-)

purple_moon123 August 16 2013, 22:25:44 UTC

yay new chapter!!

Lionel is really a sick fuck! It's a good thing that Lex found the camera too bad he didn't find it sooner. Hopefully he'll find Chloe soon.

MORE!!!!!!!

p.s.
Chloe yanked her hand back before the blade made contact, and Oliver watched as the man got off his bed and slowly walked towards her, his silvery arm taking on a liquid appearance as it morphed and shortened.

Umm I think you mean Lex.

babydee1 August 17 2013, 06:39:33 UTC

*facepalm* That's what I get for trying to work on two stories simultaneously! Many thanks for spotting that, I've corrected it now. Apologies for the mis-type! :-/

Glad you like, and thanks for commenting! :-)

madlenita August 16 2013, 22:26:40 UTC

Wow, just wow... And i guess poor Lex, seeing Chloe in this situation.... And i guess some evens will go like in season 4, i mean will Clark help to save Chloe?
Thanks for this chapter....

babydee1 August 17 2013, 07:05:04 UTC

Glad you like, Maddie! We'll see how the rescue operation goes. ;-)

sheliana August 16 2013, 22:33:29 UTC

Wow, talk about perfect timing! I've just read an unbrearably depressing Clex fic (literally minutes ago!), and I'm so happy I can take my mind off it with some juicy Chlex ( ... )

babydee1 August 17 2013, 06:47:10 UTC

"Oh,and you accidentally called Lex Oliver..."

*is sheepish* Apologies for the Freudian slip, I was editing a Chlollie story at the same time. All fixed! :-)

Back to comment in detail later. :-P

babydee1 October 26 2013, 10:49:08 UTC

...and I'm back! Sorry for the delay. Forgive me? :-)

"...well, it's not like there was a lot of Chlex in this chapter.:)) But considering where the last chapter ended, I am not surprised! Maybe it's evil of me to say, but I'm very glad Chloe got kidnapped - I love me some angst and action! And this chapter delivered both.:)"

Glad you approve, m'dear! There's no way Lionel was just going to rest on his laurels, and any other outcome would have been too easy. Like yo, I love me some angst and action! :-P

"Glad to see Lex being proactive and smart (I will not start bitching about the show again. I will not. Will. Not.:))"

Must...resist...the bitching...! :-D

"Did the "Edward Scissorhands" guy ever make an appearance on Smallville, or is he an original character? (It's been more than two years since I watched the show's episodes, so I can't remember.)"Yes, he did, and his name was Tyler. He went after Lois when she dug up the body, which is how he twigged that Chloe was alive and went and told Lionel, after which he ( ... )

ctbn60 August 18 2013, 16:29:17 UTC

Lex should ask clark for help now chloe is too important not too! Fantast chapter

babydee1 August 20 2013, 06:57:28 UTC

Thanks, hun - glad you like! :-)