Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown IX, 'Fessing Up

[babydee1]

More Chlollie in the House, WOOT!

Back  with the next instalment of the BITB Series, titled 'Fessing Up.  My apologies for the white lines of text; it seems I have formatting gremlins tonight, and no matter what I try, I can't get rid of them.  Hope it doesn't hinder your enjoyment of the chapter, though.

Have fun!  Feedback is always welcome. :-)

Comments

[babydee1]

“Bitch, don’t make me hurt you!” 
That reaction is so strange.

Not really, my sisters and I say it to one another all the time. In a weird way, it's term of endearment! :-P

"What is Lois really angry about?"

We'll get to that later on. But her annoyance is justifiable. Heck, if my sister took off and got married on the spur of the moment, I'd be pissed as hell, too!

[babydee1]

"Thanks for your reply, it made me think. I only have a brother, which explains my first reaction to Lois' reaction. :) "

No worries! I guessed as much, but I wasn't sure if I should ask. 'Bitch' is definitely a Sister thing. You should hear me and mine talking on the phone, it's all "Hey, Bitch!" :-D

"So I understand Lois a bit more now. Still, she was harsh. I don't like how she treated Ollie (and Chloe). Then again, Chloe is what, 22, 23...? She is young, and her first marriage failed. I just can't wait to get to the bottom of it, is it just extreme worry for Chloe on Lois' part?"

I kind of addressed it below, when you asked:

" . Is it that she's worried Chloe wasn't sure, wasn't ready to get married?" **
That's a significant part of it, yes, for reasons which will be explained in the next chapter. :-)

[jediyoda99]

I love the banter between Oliver and Lois!However, i think Lois went overboard there. She should apologize as much as Oliver needs also to apologize to her. Oh well am sure it was just first reactions as usual :)

[babydee1]

Thanks cor commenting, JediYoda! You're right, it was Lois's a knee-jerk reaction - and she will apologise, LOL! :-)

[rediney028]

OUR was hilarious! NOTICE OF LOIS IN RELATION TO AGE AND CHLOE OLIVER WAS VERY FUN, I THINK THIS STORY REALLY PROMISE. CONGRATULATIONS

[babydee1]

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying the series! I quite like that there's a substantial age difference between them - not substantial enough to be pervy, though! :-P

[chlollifan84]

Oliver and Lois are two children :) but I love the banter between them. And I also like Clark reaction. Can't wait to reead next chapter!!

[babydee1]

"Oliver and Lois are two children :)"

Classic playground antics, LOL! :-D And Clark's being all mature, for a change. I like it! :-P

Thanks for commenting, hun! *hugs* :-)

[ica013]

First thank you - most FF writers have Lois/Chloe as allergic to the oven and well I must of missed that episode
Clark has me a little worried, he has appeared to be all accepting and happy but was that just a ruse or is he giving Ollie the hard word around the corner
Lois, I'm thinking it was the hard word to the newlyweds or she would crack up into a blubbering weeping mess. Calling Ollie a craddle robber was funny though (isn't she like only a year old than Chloe and she went out with Ollie first!
Of course the prospect of tiny feet is squeelious

[ica013]

yeah ages is a bit funny. I only thought about a year or so though because they made her go back to high school because she didn't get into college (for Lois).

[babydee1]

Thanks, Stef! I know I calculated and explained the age difference a few stories back, but it's nice to have it in front of me again.

Copy-pasting from an earlier post:

"Re: the Chlollie age difference, you won't believe how much time I spent working that out. Going by information from the Pilot episode which puts Clark, Chloe & Lana at roughly 15, and Lex about 7 or 8 years older than them, and Reunion which appeared to make Ollie at least 2 years older than Lex, I came up with a 9-10 year age difference between Oliver and Chloe.

Yep, I take this shit waaaaay too seriously. :)"