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jacques21 December 9 2011, 10:07:45 UTC
Only a kid of Chloe's can get away with calling Bruce Wayne Brucie. This girl is so dang happy and energetic. :)

Uh-oh and the truth is about to come out.

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jlvsclrk December 9 2011, 22:38:39 UTC
Back together again. Now if they'd only trust each other enough to let their feelings out.

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jlvsclrk December 9 2011, 22:40:19 UTC
Nitpickery PS - the link to the next chapter actually loops back to this post.

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babydee1 December 11 2011, 01:49:06 UTC
Fixed - thanks for letting me know, I was posting it at 3am! :-)

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kyizi December 10 2011, 00:00:27 UTC
Still loving this!

(btw, the link for Chapter 9 takes you back to this chapter)

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babydee1 December 11 2011, 01:47:41 UTC
Fixed it now. Thank you! :-D

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kyizi December 12 2011, 21:19:23 UTC
good to know - means if i get around to a re-read (very likely, as I tend to do that a lot!) I will not spend more time than I really should have working out what was happening (seriously, you'd've laughed. I was so confused and so tired and not quite sure what was happening - 'wait...what? ...i have read this' *click* '...okay...deja vu?' *click* 'I...huh?* - it took a while for the penny to drop!)

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mari2anne December 10 2011, 14:14:21 UTC
Now, Chloe of all people should remember how wonderful and intuitive Clark has always been around children! He did have those awesome understanding Kents to show him how to be a great parent.

And, I'm pretty sure that deep down Chloe must have known how much Gabby wanted and needed her father; just as Chloe herself had always wanted and needed her own mother!

Well, I did know angst was a-comin' and I can only imagine that unacknowledged guilt could be fuelling Chloe's anger.

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bkwurm1 December 10 2011, 19:42:13 UTC
I think the last three years have really hurt Chloe. I take back what I said about the younger generation being smarter. The Sullivan girls are great about seeing other people's lives clearly, but they seriously much their own lives up if not careful.

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