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jacques21 December 9 2011, 09:03:16 UTC
Oh wow wow wow! Why couldn't this have happened on the show. For now on this is how that scene played out for me.

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mari2anne December 9 2011, 11:11:45 UTC
Yeah, that's probably EXACTLY why they never aired that shower scene! It could ONLY have gone in this direction!

But OMG! how the hell could he have walked away from her after that...

Hopefully he can keep his promise this time...

Loving every line...

Off to read the next update... withholds happy shout, it's the middle of the night, after all, and everyone's out cold... well, not everyone!!! Who needs sleep anyway?

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mari2anne December 9 2011, 11:13:53 UTC
....just a silly note... your next chapter links aren't working... but that's why you have
"...what comes next..." right?

BTW, I love all your chapter pictures... nice, nice work by your very talented artists!

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babydee1 December 9 2011, 11:24:12 UTC
Hi Mari,

...I know, I haven’t put them in yet. By the time I was done posting Chapter 16 (at nearly 5am!), I was too knackered to do anything else but go to bed and wake up two hours later. I’m pretty much sleepworking at the office right now!

I’ll put them in later tonight when I post the rest of the story. But thanks for letting me know! :-)

"BTW, I love all your chapter pictures... nice, nice work by your very talented artists!"

I feel like the luckiest girl in the world. Tiffany and Chloie really excelled, didn't they? :-)

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bkwurm1 December 10 2011, 19:09:43 UTC
I guess my patience paid off sooner than I expected. Sure, present day Chloe is still tense, but I'll take what I can get!

It all comes down to guilt and noble sacrifice doesn't it? Honestly, both Clark and Chloe way over think things.

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voidknightsc February 20 2013, 14:41:35 UTC
This is starting to sound rather like "The Fallen Sky"...albeit with less angst...so far.

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laurelnola June 23 2014, 01:28:27 UTC
"Slowly he relaxed, taking deep breaths and rolling onto his side, taking Chloe with him. She curled up against his side and nestled her head under his chin, as she’d done many times before. Only then they’d just been friends. Now they were lovers and a whole lot more ( ... )

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babydee1 June 24 2014, 01:08:51 UTC
"*sniffs* So lovely!! Although really I think they were always lovers-without-the-lovemaking, no matter how much they tried to fool themselves with the "we're just friends, really" bullshit, but whatever, because, sigh, so sweet and lovely!"

...and that just says it all! Lovers-without-the-lovemaking...perfect. You come up with the best Chlark phrases, Dawnie!

"I LOVE how protective he is of her! You know I think that's Clark's driving force, his mantra: Chloe Sullivan doesn't die!"

It definitely is. And that's why he would give up everything, including his own happiness, to keep her safe, and vice versa. Love doesn't get any more EPIC than that. :-)

"Yay! Go Clark! Why did we never see this proactive Clark on the show! Why, show?!"

Because the show was run by pansies who chickened out on the story of a lifetime... pillocks!!! *seethes*

"Oh, who needed you, anyway, when we have Dee to show us all that Clark was supposed to be! *applauds*"

*blushes* Awww, shucks!


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