Chlark Fanfic: Peach Bikini, Chapter 1

[babydee1]

New Chlark story in tha House! :-)

Been a nightmare computerless week, but I managed to tidy this up over the weekend.

Written for marikology in part as a (very late!) birthday fic and also in fulfilment of her kind donation to the help_superrobyn appeal. Thanks for your patience, Mariko!  Been a long time coming, but here it is. ;-)

Banner of brilliance made by the ever

Comments

[eternal_moonie]

*Cuddles You*

WOOHOO!!! A completely new story from Dee!

AWESOME start sweetie!

[liselle2010]

Angst is all well and good but a fun piece of absolute fluffy joy can be fun too. This is such a good start. Want to know something funny? I have been reading your Chlollie fics for a long time but I never realized you had Chlark's as well. I think I have some reading ahead of me. I just love that boy.

[babydee1]

“Angst is all well and good but a fun piece of absolute fluffy joy can be fun too.”

I’m in serious need of some Chlark levity. I didn’t realise how much angst I’ve been churning out lately; my current Chlark WIPs Crisis and The Fallen Sky are both very interesting but heartbreaking stories. The show really disappointed me Chlarkwise, and I guess my resentment for TPTB has been bleeding into my fic. :-/

“This is such a good start.”

Thank you! :-)

“Want to know something funny? I have been reading your Chlollie fics for a long time but I never realized you had Chlark's as well.”

Egads! Really?!? I cut my teeth on Chlark long before Chlollie came along!

“I think I have some reading ahead of me.”

I hope you like them! :-)

“I just love that boy.”

I love who he used to be, and who he could have been, but by the time the finale rolled around, I didn’t care for him at all. But I can always fix the wrongs of TPTB in fanfic!

Glad you like it, and thanks again! *hugs*

[babydee1]

Been trying to post it for days, but strange computers always mess up my formatting! :-(

Glad you like it, my sweet!

[babydee1]

Thanks, hun! It’s a pity that I’ve clearly spoiled who won the debate, but I couldn’t pass up the chance of a banner of Chloe in That bikini. ;-)

I guess in retrospect I could have put a pimped-out, gangsterised Clark somewhere in there, as well to keep people guessing. Any takers? :-P

Glad you like it!

weee

[djf1973]

Like I said Dee the Soulless bastar....er writers and such made Clark a jelly spined t*at!Luckily there are kick ass Chlark writers like yourself that have changed all that.We are the ppl of fanon,it is up to us to bring back happy Chlark,to undo the evil taint of stupid that Smallville had done since season two!Luck for us it is over so we can now write fresh without the disappointment of the show.I love your stories Dee and I r happy to see new Chlark in the hizzle fo shizzle.

Re: weee

[babydee1]

Heh! Happy to right the wrongs of Smallville just for you, Danny. ;-)

[wwg23]

This is sooooooo good! I love the quips and jokes and the touches of reality - the drum roll, the Jaws theme, the class participation. There is so much to love!

Clark gestured to his best friend. “Ladies first.”
“Aren’t we always?” she quipped, earning herself a smattering of applause from her fellow female pupils."

and

“Clark can pick first this time,” she said offered.
“Yeah, ladies first!” chuckled Jake, causing the class to erupt in twitters of laughter.

and

She stopped what she was doing and turned to face him. “Are you challenging me?” she said incredulously.
“Clark, are you challenging her?” Pete asked.
“Dude, are you challenging her?” asked Jake

Lol! Love this!!!! :)

“And you’d better get down the gym!” he shouted gleefully at her retreating back.
She froze and spun around, staring at him in shock. “Why, you little-!”

Lol! I love Clark's mounting confidence. :)

So looking forward to more, Dee.

[babydee1]

Aw, I love you - you picked out all my favourite lines!!! *cuddles* :-D

I've got the rest of it all written out in longhand, and I've been struggling to type on my husband's laptop with the oddly positioned keys. And all his webpages mess up my formatting, so I have to edit everything twice!!! :-(

But the thoughts of the looks on all your faces makes it sooooo worth it. Thanks so much, glad you like - and I hope to update again soon! :-)

[phantom_queen]

Hah, that's perfect. Chloe should have wiped the floor with him just for the gym comment. Can't wait to see how this turns out.

[babydee1]

I think the banner screams the outcome of the debate, LOL. But it'll still be a fun journey, I promise! :-P

Clark was very naughty with that comment, wasn't he?

Many thanks for commenting, PQ. Glad you like! :-)