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Chlark Fanfic: Wounded Heart, Chapter 1

Feb 06, 2009 18:36

Now, this is what really should have happened after Legion!

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margroks February 6 2009, 18:12:49 UTC

Yikes! But Chloe was spot on in everything she said. Clark is an ass for doing what he did and not even having the guts to admit it. So much for superior Kryptonian intelligence.

babydee1 February 6 2009, 18:55:59 UTC

"Clark is an ass for doing what he did and not even having the guts to admit it."

Word. The way he never owned up to the mindwipe rankled me no end. I just had to correct that. No way is he getting away with memory wipe in my book!

christina_kat February 6 2009, 18:16:55 UTC

Oh!now I get it!

Great Chloe! Make him realize his BIG,STUPID mistake!
thanks!

babydee1 February 7 2009, 10:07:48 UTC

Hee! Don't you just love it when Clark gets his ass kicked by a girl? :-D And yes, he SO deserves it!

Thanks for your feedback, hun!

laurelnola February 6 2009, 18:51:38 UTC

SQUEEEEEEEEEE! Dee, this is FABULOUS! That is EXACTLY what Chloe should be screaming at Clark. He deserved every syllable. And btw, this:

“I originally planned on kicking you in the short and curlies, so thank your lucky stars my better nature prevailed.”

..had me rolling on the floor. BWAH!

Suck it, Clark! The truth hurts, doesn't it? Ah, this whole chapter made me smile with cathartic pleasure. Thank you!

babydee1 February 7 2009, 08:48:49 UTC

Hee! You're welcome anytime, Dawn.

And you wouldn't believe how many times I toyed with Chloe actually kicking him over & over in the balls with a Kryptonite steel-toed boot! I think writing it out several times was cathartic enough for me, so I eventually deleted it and went with the punch.

And Clark's "I never throw away good memories" line? I actually yelled, "Clark Kent, you f*****g b*****d!!!!" at my screen when he said it.

Too bad Ive already posted the chapter. You think it's too late for that krypto-boot?!?

Thanks for your comments! :)

laurelnola February 7 2009, 12:54:55 UTC

"You think it's too late for that krypto-boot?!?"

It's okay. I'm just going to picture it happening in my head. *closes eyes and smiles*
Hee. Yeah, that IS funny. ;-)

Incidentally, I must have had your "short and curlies" remark on the brain because last night I dreamed I had to take Del-boy to the hospital after someone kicked him in the groin and he passed out. And I had to do it in their three-wheeler, too! Yeesh!

babydee1 February 7 2009, 14:26:42 UTC

Hee hee!!! Oh, dear Lord! :-D

Has Seamus been sujecting you to repeat viewings of the dastardly duo of Peckham??! I am laughing so hard here Lanre just asked if I was alright!!!

butifulyletdown February 6 2009, 19:00:01 UTC

Excellent! Wow, what's up with Chloe?

And Clark is definitely an ass.

Look forward to more

babydee1 February 7 2009, 08:53:59 UTC

"Wow, what's up with Chloe?"
Oh, you'll soon find out!

"And Clark is definitely an ass."
Truer words were never spoken.

"Look forward to more"
Will do my best to have Ch 4 up by Monday!

cifan70 February 6 2009, 22:44:50 UTC

Nice continuation. Still loving it. Please keep going. Looking forward to more.

babydee1 February 7 2009, 09:28:30 UTC

Thank you!

Weekends are quite busy for me, so the next chapter will be up next week.

Glad you like it!