Rosebud Fic - Hunter

Aug 17, 2010 21:51

Here is my rosebud for the prompt: Wild Side. I hope you like it!

Hunter
Author: Dark Star
Written for ba_rosebuds
Prompt Title - Wild Side
Word count: 492
We never saw Angel and Dawn together, and this might have been one of the memories that the monks implanted.

Hunter )

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librarian2003 August 17 2010, 22:47:19 UTC


What a lovely little rosebud, DS. Loved it!

It would play with it first, and really, that was the best part…

Only you would come up with that! Super...

and

the quivering mouse held delicately in his huge paw

Yep, he's a bigger cat than the one he's robbed of its toy...

And I really liked the idea of exploring how uncomfortable Angel might be with a younger sister to contend with.

Jo

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scribesds August 18 2010, 23:38:51 UTC
Yes, its something we never got to see, did we? People like to forget Angel’s a predator - I wonder if the cat sees him as a big cat?

Thanks for reading, Jo.

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ljgould August 18 2010, 01:42:46 UTC
Oh, I love it!

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scribesds August 18 2010, 23:40:42 UTC
Thank you, LJ!

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racheltng August 18 2010, 03:53:14 UTC
This is adorable! I would have liked to have seen some Angel and Dawn interactions on screen, but this is a great window into what it might have been like.

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scribesds August 18 2010, 23:44:24 UTC
Thank you. Yes, it’s interesting to speculate, as we never had the chance to see how they got on. There is no doubt that a little sister would have certainly put a different slant on things.

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perpetual August 18 2010, 04:46:59 UTC
Oooh! Angel & Dawn! My favorite! I love that you have her trying to be sophisticated and him just being uncomfortable, though hopefully that was early on and they bonded a little later.

When Angel's sadism came up, all I could think was "When's the next Harsh Reality??" It's so rare to see that most fascinating side of him.

Loved the last line, too. So wrong but at the same time so incredibly right.

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scribesds August 19 2010, 00:02:03 UTC
Thank you, Kairos. I hope I did justice to your prompt!

I saw this as some point really early in their relationship, when Dawn would have been very young.

When Angel's sadism came up, all I could think was "When's the next Harsh Reality??" It's so rare to see that most fascinating side of him.

Was that a hint? That side of him intrigues me. What a complex creature he is… I’d forgotten how much I love playing with him. As to HR - it’s coming, I promise. I didn’t realise you were a fan! Do you have a favourite part in the series so far?

BTW - your icon makes me smile every time!

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perpetual August 19 2010, 05:13:13 UTC
Yeah, I'm pretty much addicted to HR. The thing is, though, that it hits me right in the fetishes, and I'm very skittish about mentioning those anywhere public. So if I'm not actively vocalizing my interest, that's why.

I think I liked "Limits" best. Or "She Bleeds".

NOM NOM. I just wish I could remember where I found this icon so I could credit its creator-- it's the oldest one I have!

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scribesds August 19 2010, 21:51:53 UTC
Your reluctance to give anything away is quite understandable, and I wasn’t really asking you to. I’ve had some fabulous conversations on that series over the years and its often been helped by insights and comments from other people - privately, usually…
:o)

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ares132006 August 18 2010, 05:49:03 UTC
Oh, this is lovely. I've missed your writing.

Jo had already quoted my favourite parts, Angel's lurking sadism and his huge paw...however, this other line I really liked.

“He was under the bench when I arrived,” Angel responded quietly, wondering how on earth she hadn’t known the cat was there.

Angel has been a vamp for so long I think he's forgotten how limited human senses are.

Excellent rosebud.

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scribesds August 19 2010, 00:44:28 UTC
Thank you, Ares. I've missed writing, too!

I was afraid I'd forgotten how...

Glad you liked it!

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