Friday evening rosebud

Aug 06, 2010 19:39



Rosebuds. I love rosebuds. 500 words or so. How hard can this be? Okay, I went over, my rosebud is approx. 540. So sue me. *grins*

Title: Shadows

Author: Ares

Characters: Buffy and Angel

Rating: G

Prompt: Shadows

Disclaimer: If wishes were horses...

Shadows )

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librarian2003 August 6 2010, 10:47:46 UTC
Oh, that was a twist! You reckon they'll have that by 2050? Hmm... :~))))

Very nice, my dear. Poor Angel - he can't ever let go....

Jo

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ares132006 August 7 2010, 06:12:30 UTC
2050 is 40 years away. Just look at what's happening now. We didn't have the internet 40 years ago, or home computers. I bet that things will advance so much in 40 years we'll not know ourselves.

Glad you liked the twist. *grins*

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ital_gal August 6 2010, 14:29:16 UTC
ok that was beautiful. no surprise there, although the little twist you gave it was. I`m feeling a bit sentimental these days, made me tear up, cheer up. it was sad and yet you let us see that there was happiness too. thanks for that and always for writing

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ares132006 August 7 2010, 06:15:32 UTC
I made you tear up? *dusts off hands* My work here is done. :~))))

I'm pleased you liked the hint of happiness there. Buffy and Angel had a life together and like all things it came to an end.

Did you see the bit where I said that Buffy was in a better place, that she had told him so? I was referring to Buffy telling Angel she had gone to heaven, when she jumped off that tower to save the world and Dawn. Angel would know that Buffy was happy and in heaven.

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ljgould August 6 2010, 15:46:35 UTC
What a heartbreakingly sweet rosebud. I'm so glad you're writing.

Hugs!

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ares132006 August 7 2010, 06:28:30 UTC
Thanks, LJ. Recent events coloured my rosebud, as I'm sure you've noticed.

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perpetual August 6 2010, 16:21:36 UTC
That started out so romantically I knew there had to be a catch-- totally didn't see the hologram thing coming, though. What got me was Angel talking and Buffy listening. That's a turnaround, and it makes sense that he would only get to that place after she was gone.

I love the sense of peace, and his contentment that Buffy had lived a grand life and he had been a part of it. Great rosebud; thanks for writing it!

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ares132006 August 7 2010, 06:53:43 UTC
Yep. Angel talking...that was a clue. :0)

And so happy that the twist was not what you expected.

I like to think that even if Angel stayed vamp, that he and Buffy had a life together, at least spend some years being happy, only not perfectly so.

Glad you liked and I was happy to write the rosebud. They are such fun.

Thanks for your lovely feedback.

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buffyangellvr23 August 6 2010, 19:32:08 UTC
ooooh very interesting :)

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ares132006 August 7 2010, 06:54:10 UTC
Thanks, glad you liked.

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