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Aug 06, 2005 21:59

have you ever wanted somthn so bad and couldnt have it i have. VIVA LA BAM674 [9:32 P.M.]: ive had a bad year...i want somthn so bad that i cant have..have you ever wanted somthn like that
DancingChick0131 [9:33 P.M.]: yes
DancingChick0131 [9:33 P.M.]: and what is it that you want so bad
VIVA LA BAM674 [9:34 P.M.]: a special person to hold on to...to call my own...but you cant always get what you want
DancingChick0131 [9:35 P.M.]: aww. bradley im gonna cry.. Well im sure you will find that special person someday. She will come to you unexpectedly
DancingChick0131 [9:35 P.M.]: you just have to give life time
DancingChick0131 [9:36 P.M.]: aww but that is so sweet
VIVA LA BAM674 [9:36 P.M.]: ive just been depressed lately...shes to blind to see how bad her bf is treating her and want give me the chance to show her and give her everything she deserves
DancingChick0131 [9:37 P.M.]: is this _______
VIVA LA BAM674 [9:37 P.M.]: yea..
VIVA LA BAM674 [9:37 P.M.]: howd you know...
DancingChick0131 [9:38 P.M.]: i figured... I can just tell. Like when yall dated in school you really looked at her like you loved her.
DancingChick0131 [9:38 P.M.]: have you talked to her about it?
DancingChick0131 [9:38 P.M.]: have you told her how you felt ..
VIVA LA BAM674 [9:40 P.M.]: see i wished someone would tell her how i felt like how yall can tell that i really loved her but she thinks i didnt act like i did.....

i tried writing a poem i wrote simular to this one but forgot to save cause i wrote it on here....

here it goes...because of you i know who i am because of you i am who i am to have such a woman as special as you wonderful faithful loyal and true as i begin to look into your eyes i began to realize and put on a smile cause i know we will be together for a while even when your crying even when your sad i can sit and talk to you and you will began to seem glad as i sit and think god for bringing you my way that is something i can truly say some day we will be together and close to my heart until the day death do us part after marriage youll still be very near united together without any fear of drifting away together we will stay without any doubt of thinking this way I promise you girl ill be better this time if true love is wrong ill be committing a crime i promise you no hurt no more pain all the sadness will begin to drain ill feel you with happiness no sorrows no tears i promise you baby that day is near i hope to live happy jointed with you and i hope some day youll feel the same way 2

nick tell me what you think if you read this...i need some comments from a fellow poet..lol

one day she will be mine...

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