Comments | b_hallward: Beta? Brit-picking?

b_hallward

Beta? Brit-picking?

Mar 17, 2009 23:22

Is there anyone willing to Brit-pick and lightly beta a short piece of Bradley/Colin RPS?

( Assorted fic notes )

writing, kindness of strangers, this post lacks content

Comments 16

samescenes March 18 2009, 04:54:00 UTC

Morgana/Merlin: freaky magical metaphorical pegging?

EMPHATIC YES.

b_hallward March 18 2009, 05:12:46 UTC

I think what we have here is a meeting of the minds. Pushing him down on the bed, open to her and just taking it.

samescenes March 18 2009, 05:28:05 UTC

I may have spent too long thinking about Morgana sitting on Merlin's face, her slick all over his lips and chin and nose while he holds her thighs open. Maybe.

b_hallward March 18 2009, 05:53:12 UTC

That's a happy place--I'm not sure why you'd want to leave.

In fact, I think someone should write this. Messy, porny oral sex.

Thread 8

bewarethesmirk March 18 2009, 05:05:14 UTC

I'll beta all of them do I sound overeager? Oops. I am not British, but I have 3-4 years experience with Britpicking in HP fandom. :)

You know my email address, I think. In case not: bewarethesmirk at gmail dot com

b_hallward March 18 2009, 05:51:46 UTC

Yay, thanks! I'm just utterly hapless at pretending to be British; god, even the spelling. I'll send along the two that are finished.

And I hope to have a draft of section one of the crazy Rome fic done soon; then I can show it to you and you can tell me if it's hopeless or salvageable though wildly eccentric. *g*

bewarethesmirk March 18 2009, 06:04:15 UTC

You're welcome! I often revert to British spelling by accident. :P

I'll eagerly await the two that are finished, and later, the crazy Rome fic.

coffeejunkii March 18 2009, 13:53:37 UTC

i'm looking forward to the rps and the sex fic :D

b_hallward March 18 2009, 23:53:18 UTC

It shows how adorable Colin and Bradley are, because I never thought I'd write RPS. And yet. *g*

coffeejunkii March 19 2009, 00:02:23 UTC

oh, i never thought i'd write rps either. then suddenly there were 12k of rps. whoops.

b_hallward March 19 2009, 00:06:51 UTC

So Colin/Bradley was the first RPS you did?

I find somehow RPS is a bit different from writing other fanfic, though I can't put my finger on exactly how. But especially when I'm switching back and forth between Colin/Bradley and Merlin/Arthur, the effect is a little weird.

Thread 5