Drabble: Supple (Arthur/Merlin, NWS)

Feb 06, 2009 01:57

Summary: With one hand he undoes Arthur's belt, the leather worn soft with age.

Supple )

fixed-forms, tense: present, pairing:arthur/merlin, fanfic, words: 100, fanfic: merlin, merlin, drabbles

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stealingpennies February 6 2009, 09:20:54 UTC

I really like this - it's extremely tightly written but packs a punch in a few words. I love power dynamics and the way Arthur deliberately gives up control to Merlin. (It's a small private moment where he can just be Arthur and not the prince.)

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b_hallward February 7 2009, 04:00:18 UTC
Thanks! I think in part it really is the power dynamics--not necessarily as they are in the series, but as they might be--that make what they get up to in the bedroom so interesting. Well, that and the pretty.

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itachitachi February 6 2009, 09:44:48 UTC
Ohh. This is lovely. What an intense moment; you use your words really powerfully.

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b_hallward February 7 2009, 04:01:03 UTC
Thank you! It was a lot of fun to write and I'm really glad you liked it.

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lagolindari February 6 2009, 10:24:07 UTC
Beautiful. I loved this ♥.
But then... Arthur might be surprised to find out that Merlin is not actually *that* easy to ovepower :).

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b_hallward February 7 2009, 00:37:47 UTC
Exactly! We know that Merlin is allowing himself to be overpowered in almost the same way Arthur is willingly giving over control. (One can even push the parallel into an irony because if Merlin truly wanted to overpower Arthur, there would be no way Arthur could stop him.)

So in an odd way Arthur's understanding of the power dynamics is both exactly correct (because of who Merlin is) and completely backwards (because of what Merlin can do). *g*

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xel1980 February 6 2009, 10:38:31 UTC
I love it so much!!! <3

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b_hallward February 7 2009, 00:39:08 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it.

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ineptshieldmaid February 6 2009, 12:07:47 UTC
Oh, well DONE. Very well handled, leaving the details to last. :)

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b_hallward February 7 2009, 00:40:19 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it.

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