Title: The Overturning Moment
Fandom: New Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Danny Williams/Steve McGarrett
Rating: R
Summary: Steve's pregnant and panicking
Disclaimer: Don't own them, no harm intended, no profit made etc.
Warnings: Mpreg and angst. If you think that finding out you’re pregnant is always a happy, fluffy thing then you should probably steer
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Poor Steve and Danny.
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It's quite tempting to write what happens after the baby arrives and Steve finally gets what Danny's been goofy about all along... but in a very snarky Steve and Danny sort of way, of course...
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This is lovely, and I would love to read more in this verse, especially as you're keeping it so realistic and keeping to the stark reality. Really great stuff! I especially enjoyed the last paragraph, because god, this has Steve all over.
And can I just say -- you've done the justification really well. Mpreg is not at all my thing, normally -- mostly because I can't stand it when the writer mangles the science behind it, but this? This is excellent. I really hope you feel inspired enough to continue it!
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The science is usually a problem for me with mpreg (along with the fact that many writers turn the guys into complete girls as soon as a baby comes along). Here I had to hand wave a bit with the witch to get them where I wanted them, but the ectopic implantation and placental attachment stuff has all been seriously discussed by the medical profession with respect to the potential for male pregnancy.
Glad you liked it - I was nervous about it...
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this time, it took the cake.
the fact that it's STEVE who's pregnant is awesome, too. *flails*
(for srs, can we get a prequel of how it all happened coz? ngh<3)
*hugs* i do hope there will be more, because this is beautiful and honest and makes my heart do flipflops *HUG* :)
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Delighted you enjoyed it, anyway :)
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I do like that Danny's the first person Steve thought to call in his panic and good for Danny for being so supportive.
Do you think you are going to continue this?
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There may be more, there's stuff in my head, certainly, but I didn't expect to be writing this at all, it came a bit out of left field, so I'll have to see what happens.
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