[FIC] JaeChun

Sep 02, 2008 21:52

Title: Color My World
Pairings: JaeChun, though subtle.
Rating: G
Genre: Generic, fluff?
A/N: For milena_1980! ♥♥♥ muchos abrazos y espero que te guste este cuento ^_^

This is something I've been tinkering around with for a while, but it finally came together today. It may be a little cryptic, but I hope you can enjoy it!

Long tapered fingers stroked the smooth plane... )

!oneshot, #jaechun, !fanfic

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milena_1980 September 3 2008, 02:08:03 UTC
I love this!!!!!! It's beautiful and just how he finds reminders in everything he sees, I wish I could give you a better comment. The ending is amazing, and the wording, the style, so melancholy, and yet hopeful.

Ack, I don't think I'm making much sense
Muchos besos y abrazos y un millón de gracias <333333333333333333333333333

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azurehook September 3 2008, 13:19:26 UTC
I'm so happy you enjoyed it!!! and no, your comment is lovely <3333333 I didn't want it to be too sad so I'm glad you saw the bit of happy in there too.

XDDDD *BESOS Y ABRAZOS* mi querida amiga!!!

*breathes sigh of relief* was so worried it might be too cryptic so I'm ecstatic you liked it XD

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azurehook September 3 2008, 13:19:58 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it ^_^

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zhyune September 3 2008, 13:47:01 UTC
OMG chun lost his memory? D: he still remembers jaejoong though, as if its the last thing that's gonna slip away from his memories. This is so beautiful :DD♥

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azurehook September 4 2008, 12:04:03 UTC
I'm always interested to see what other people say, and wow, I really like this interpretation. It definitely makes it seem a lot more angsty than I had planned, but even more poignant and bittersweet at the end.

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it~~I wasn't quite sure what people would get out of it or what they would see.

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zhyune September 4 2008, 13:26:56 UTC
*reads it again* :D ♥♥♥ it could be interpreted in so many ways that it makes this even more beautiful :)) 'everything-remind-chun-of-jae' or 'chun-lost-his-memory-and-he-only-remembers-jae' :))

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chloe1910 September 3 2008, 22:46:49 UTC
I agree with Pandora..It's sweet of how every little thing reminds Yochun of Jae... <333

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azurehook September 4 2008, 12:04:37 UTC
^_^ thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

<333

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graveyardgrin September 4 2008, 01:15:35 UTC
Eek, this is so much love. ♥
*goes off to read more of your fics*

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azurehook September 4 2008, 12:05:40 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it.

O.O ooh, uh, just a warning, I tend to be highly eclectic in genre and style ^^;; I hope you can find something you enjoy :D

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graveyardgrin September 4 2008, 13:10:52 UTC
I was going through your oneshots and I really like them! :D elevator smut :X
will check out the chaptered ones soon. I like that you write in many styles, not many writers can do that (:

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azurehook September 7 2008, 23:26:39 UTC
Thank you so much! ur yeah... um...that's one of my earlier works *blushes*and I'm glad you're enjoying them :DDD

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