Crossroads - A Blue Gravel Path (1/13)

Aug 18, 2008 05:47

Title: A Blue Gravel Path
Characters: The Doctor, Rose Tyler, among others
Warnings: PG. Oh, and it’s baby!fic.
Spoilers: For the sake of this story, S4 never happens.
Beta: runriggers

Story Summary..... This is the last place the Doctor wants to go. This is the last person Jackie wants to see. This is the last chance Rose will get. This is the last ( Read more... )

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jlrpuck August 18 2008, 14:00:20 UTC
Oh, dear. Naughty Dex, just like his father!

The children are fabulous in this--fully formed as their own characters, wonderfully sketched out so I can visualize not only their actions, but their appearance. And Rose and Ten are fabulous as well, unable to keep their hands off of each other (given a few quiet moments), and making a delightful team as they jointly parent their children.

I can't wait to see what kind of mess Dex has landed them in.

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azriona August 19 2008, 22:31:53 UTC
Thanks!

I love writing kids. They're just so much fun, especially at Dex's age when they have no issues with saying anything that pops into their heads.

I can't wait to see what kind of mess Dex has landed them in.

Mwahahahahaha.

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bananasandroses August 18 2008, 18:28:09 UTC


Shiny! New Crossroads fic, just what I need to make this day a helluva lot better than it has been hitherto.

And while it’s somehow unsurprising that a child of the Doctor’s won’t eat anything but bananas ... I can’t help but think that a trip to Elizabethan England (if I understand Dex correctly?) is not what the Doctor or Rose need just now ...

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azriona August 19 2008, 22:33:47 UTC
Hee! Shiny! I am much pleased.

I can’t help but think that a trip to Elizabethan England (if I understand Dex correctly?) is not what the Doctor or Rose need just now ...

You understand Dex perfectly. Classic case of four-year-old (minus one month) ears.

And this trip is SO not what the Doctor has in mind.

just what I need to make this day a helluva lot better than it has been hitherto.

*hugs* I'm thinking about you, hon.

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gate_ship August 18 2008, 22:27:24 UTC
Oh! Dex wants to marry Sarah Jane! That's so adorable and is going to be so depressing when she dies which is making me depressed so we're going back to Dex. Elizabethan England is never a good place for the Doctor...

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azriona August 19 2008, 22:34:53 UTC
Thanks!

That's so adorable and is going to be so depressing when she dies which is making me depressed

*eyes wide* Am I missing something in canon? Or are you just going way into the future on this one, since Sarah Jane has a good forty years on Dex, easy?

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gate_ship August 19 2008, 22:36:18 UTC
Oh God no you're not missing anything in canon! I meant in the future because she's human and mortal and all that!

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azriona August 19 2008, 22:48:45 UTC
Oh, good, okay. I know there's a storyline out there in Old Who where Sarah Jane dies, but I think you have to dig into the books and stuff to really get there.

I don't think Dex quite understands the whole mortal thing just yet. Being four, and all. He's got this impression that Sarah Jane will remain exactly as she is until he catches up to her, and then they'll just get older together. Or maybe stay the same.

(He's not one for thinking things through, Dex.)

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orelle_peredhil August 18 2008, 23:03:05 UTC
You have children, I have Jack.

That sentence almost resulted in a mouthful of banana smoothie being sprayed all over my computer screen. *cackles*

She was always laughing at him, which didn’t exactly sit well with Dex, and once they were married when Dex was older, he’d put a stop to it.

And that made me howl with laughter, since all the smoothie was safely down the hatch. As did Dex's mental soliloquy about Panyards. I'm utterly enchanted by the kids and am waiting with bated breath to see what happens next!

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azriona August 19 2008, 22:35:37 UTC
Thanks! I love hearing what makes people laugh - also because I've always thought of this as a funny chapter. :)

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earlgreytea68 August 18 2008, 23:59:43 UTC
This? Is fabulous. I adore it. Dex cracks me up.

"When I put him down, we lay the building blocks of a temporal education which will help him pilot the TARDIS someday."

Hahahahahaha!

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azriona August 19 2008, 22:37:16 UTC
I am so pleased that you like Dex I can't even BEGIN, oh queen of kid!fic. :) Thanks!!!

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