Antichristmas gift for kiwiana

Jun 19, 2010 01:10

Dean smelled the stench of blood before he saw the littered bloody bodies strewn across the filthy floor of an abandoned house in a suburb west of Detroit. It looked as though something had ripped the hearts from their chests.  He fought against the bile rising in his throat and the crawling sensation beneath his skin.

“Dean. So good of you to ( Read more... )

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kiwiana June 19 2010, 07:13:48 UTC
^____^

It is a Merry Antichristmas indeed! Thank you so much!! *hugs*

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azinazelle June 19 2010, 18:09:56 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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azinazelle June 19 2010, 18:12:25 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! "Swan Song" made me so sad. I wanted them to be together even if they needed a little "help" from Luci.

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keerawa June 19 2010, 16:15:30 UTC
Oh, well done! I like the way you evoked that image of Samifer sitting there on the step with the bodies around him at the beginning.

Poor Dean - no matter which way he jumps he's still got to kill one of his brothers.

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azinazelle June 19 2010, 18:17:21 UTC
Poor Dean indeed. I still keep thinking there's got to be an angelic "exorcism" spell out there somewhere. Then again if Adam dies he'll be with his mom again. *grasping at straws*

I like the way you evoked that image of Samifer sitting there on the step with the bodies around him at the beginning.

Thanks! That scene actually scared me when I first saw it. Samifer was so regal and terrifying all at once.

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avictoriangirl June 20 2010, 02:14:54 UTC
OMG this is awesome sweetie! *pets them*

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azinazelle June 20 2010, 06:33:47 UTC
Aw thanks! *hugs* I was afraid it wasn't good as I wrote it in two days after my muse inconveniently went on a hiatus for a month.

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crew4 June 21 2010, 05:56:41 UTC
This is awesome. Poor Dean, he just loves Sam too much. I love it!!

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