Manifesto Down

[azderak]

I made a few industrial/noise experimental electronic songs, and you can view them at www.myspace.com/manifestodown . I know it isn't anyone here's cup of tea musically, but it would be awesome if you gave it a listen and told me what you think of it.

Comments

[neurotic_pyro]

Well it was certainly interesting. I don't really know how to tell you what I think because I don't listen to much experimental, but I'll give it a shot.

Lascivia
I thought the two segments were too disjointed, you kind of tied them together at the end with the two-note layer you used behind the first, but it sounded almost a tad forced. . . I don't really know what I'm suggesting. . . perhaps more of a transition between the two segments, more overlap maybe. I did really like the manic laughter as the last sound a lot though.

Rx
This one I liked a lot, again, can't really explain why. The beeping layer when combined with the man speaking about the soul gave it kind of an old-school sci fi movie feel to it. I didn't really get the exchange between the man and woman towards the end, what were you trying to do with it?

The Breakdown
Aptly named, fucking intense! It kind of gave me a headache, but I thought this one was the best put together, though probably not my favorite of the four.

They lied to you
This too was really well put together, but unlike the other three, it didn't really seem to have a point. There wasn't anything specific that stood out about it.

There you have it, my completely uneducated opinions about your experimental music. Overall I was pretty impressed, and I definitely think that you should continue. It reflects you quite well.

Lastly, are you ever going to be on the radio again? I kept trying to listen to you before, but I got the times mixed up somehow and got some other random guy that was not you and I was confused. If you are, be sure to let us know.