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absoluteforever January 29 2010, 02:31:00 UTC
agh.
my mind melted somewhere up there.
you are amazing. <333

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ayazani January 29 2010, 02:32:22 UTC
XD! Mind melt achieved! Awesome!
thanks for reading *w* <3

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marionetteblue3 January 29 2010, 07:55:09 UTC
OMG. THAT EXACT SONG WAS PLAYING WHEN I READ THIS.

WHAT IS THIS COINCIDENCE?

And awww. I'm torn between jealousy of your German and the cuteness of this. The last line made me go all happy. 8DD
friends?

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ayazani January 29 2010, 17:12:27 UTC
REALLY? o.o; this coincidence demands our friendship right now. XDD
I'm glad you liked it <3

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yue_blanche January 29 2010, 08:22:37 UTC
das einzige was mir komisch erscheint ist ,dass die deutschen sätze wörter enthalten sind wo an teenager erinnern. ansonsten ist die ff gut geschrieben.

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ayazani January 29 2010, 17:07:26 UTC
That is probably because I haven't really used german in 8 years, so my vocabulary is probably stuck on the limited teenage expanse. but thanks for reading~

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yue_blanche January 29 2010, 21:55:39 UTC
für mario barth hats gereicht.
nothing to thanks.

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ayazani January 30 2010, 00:06:06 UTC
liek. omg. i did not know you had an LJ. much less that you'd look at my and bother to comment or read...
WELL.
this is awkward. I do believe you still hate my guts?
(and understanding is different from writing!)

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ayazani January 29 2010, 17:08:30 UTC
Wah I am embarassed now xD I tend to write and then flail to post instead of carefully checking it over -corner of shame-
But thanks for reading *w* <3

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ayazani January 29 2010, 18:54:49 UTC
Ah, its okay I should just calm down when writing XD
But having these two doing it in my head, I somehow cannot be calm ID

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agneszika January 29 2010, 09:48:05 UTC
Aww, ich kommentier auf Deutsch, mein Hirn hat sich irgendwo zwischen dem ersten und dem zweiten "Tiefer" verabschiedet ...
Für das Ende jedenfalls muss ich dich mit Liebe überschütten! Ich musste soooo lachen xD
Abgesehen von den Grammatik- und Rechtschreibfehlern ist es wirklich toll geworden **

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ayazani January 29 2010, 17:10:42 UTC
Der vorletzte satz, ne? Gilbo just ran into my brain and said I should mention his five meters XD
but thanks for reading again! I will be more careful next time, I just flail so much when writing anything semi-decent xD

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