das einzige was mir komisch erscheint ist ,dass die deutschen sätze wörter enthalten sind wo an teenager erinnern. ansonsten ist die ff gut geschrieben.
That is probably because I haven't really used german in 8 years, so my vocabulary is probably stuck on the limited teenage expanse. but thanks for reading~
liek. omg. i did not know you had an LJ. much less that you'd look at my and bother to comment or read... WELL. this is awkward. I do believe you still hate my guts? (and understanding is different from writing!)
Wah I am embarassed now xD I tend to write and then flail to post instead of carefully checking it over -corner of shame- But thanks for reading *w* <3
Aww, ich kommentier auf Deutsch, mein Hirn hat sich irgendwo zwischen dem ersten und dem zweiten "Tiefer" verabschiedet ... Für das Ende jedenfalls muss ich dich mit Liebe überschütten! Ich musste soooo lachen xD Abgesehen von den Grammatik- und Rechtschreibfehlern ist es wirklich toll geworden **
Der vorletzte satz, ne? Gilbo just ran into my brain and said I should mention his five meters XD but thanks for reading again! I will be more careful next time, I just flail so much when writing anything semi-decent xD
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my mind melted somewhere up there.
you are amazing. <333
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thanks for reading *w* <3
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WHAT IS THIS COINCIDENCE?
And awww. I'm torn between jealousy of your German and the cuteness of this. The last line made me go all happy. 8DD
friends?
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I'm glad you liked it <3
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nothing to thanks.
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WELL.
this is awkward. I do believe you still hate my guts?
(and understanding is different from writing!)
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But thanks for reading *w* <3
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But having these two doing it in my head, I somehow cannot be calm ID
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Für das Ende jedenfalls muss ich dich mit Liebe überschütten! Ich musste soooo lachen xD
Abgesehen von den Grammatik- und Rechtschreibfehlern ist es wirklich toll geworden **
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but thanks for reading again! I will be more careful next time, I just flail so much when writing anything semi-decent xD
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