Hahaha, this is awesome! The mental image of Kurapika going 'kappa kappa'... XD;;; And the dress...! I want to see this animated! XD
A few things I noticed though, it's just nitpicking but it might be useful feedback:
At the beginning when Killua says "even kids don't believe in ghosts", you left out the 'believe'.
Where you have Hisoka say 'beautifully escape!', I heard 'kimi ni oite nigeru', so 'escape and leave you behind', I guess?
Killua: Don't say that when you're caught by a ghost you can be another person! => I think he said 'hito-mouke', as in, 'making profit'. So I think he means, "If you can catch a ghost, maybe you could sell it and make some profit"
"no-gain" Leorio, could this be like 'no-gei', as in 'no artistic talent'?
And I think Gon said that he wanted to do comedy duo "with an animal" (doubutsu to), that's why Leorio said no one would understand. I guess it refers back to the 'animal language class' on Gon's volume? And Killua's... it's hard to tell, but it's something (suichuu?)-dasshutsu, so maybe something like an escape artist show? I think Killua would be good at that, but it would indeed take time to prepare. XD
But as I said, it's just a few little things and I'm not sure about them either. ^^; Thanks for doing such a great job! ^^
ohh thanks for the correction, now i know where i got wrong, i thought in the beginning theres something wrong with it xD,, my bad :P thank you very very much.. ;D
A few things I noticed though, it's just nitpicking but it might be useful feedback:
At the beginning when Killua says "even kids don't believe in ghosts", you left out the 'believe'.
Where you have Hisoka say 'beautifully escape!', I heard 'kimi ni oite nigeru', so 'escape and leave you behind', I guess?
Killua: Don't say that when you're caught by a ghost you can be another person! => I think he said 'hito-mouke', as in, 'making profit'. So I think he means, "If you can catch a ghost, maybe you could sell it and make some profit"
"no-gain" Leorio, could this be like 'no-gei', as in 'no artistic talent'?
And I think Gon said that he wanted to do comedy duo "with an animal" (doubutsu to), that's why Leorio said no one would understand. I guess it refers back to the 'animal language class' on Gon's volume? And Killua's... it's hard to tell, but it's something (suichuu?)-dasshutsu, so maybe something like an escape artist show? I think Killua would be good at that, but it would indeed take time to prepare. XD
But as I said, it's just a few little things and I'm not sure about them either. ^^; Thanks for doing such a great job! ^^
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