OMG!!! ^^ Yay! Kota and Kei ended up together! (And Yuto was TOO hurt in the process! Added bonus!) You write romance well~ I wish I could do the same, but I think I'm only cut out for the violent stuff! XD
lol yush! ^^ haha i thought that'd be pretty predictable XDD but im glad you enjoyed it! :) haha do you mean he "wasn't"? XD lol yay Yuto gets a happy ending too! ^^ (thats what i meant by everything ending a really "perfectly" XD) thanks! :) this is actually like my first successful romance tho... LOL they usually always fail or are stopped before I reach the end.. -____-;; haha I think you'd be good at it, your writing is AWESOME! but either way thats ok, we all have our strong points! ^^
yays for oretachi! :) hows the mystery idea coming? I think I abandoned my depressing fic.. and now im back on my music idea~ ^^ haha hopefully it'll work out! XD
oh really?? thanks for reading!! :D hopefully that didnt take up too much of ur time.. ^^;; yahh yuto ends up all heartbroken *dies* nooo!! i promise to make him less saddening in my next fic! ^^ haha you're reading it already?? XD thats so awesome! ^^
XDDDD yeahhhhhhh i have to work on the cheesyness..... ^^;; but its just too lovable to resist! yayays for happy ending after the angst! XDD i hope you enjoyed reading~ ^^ thank you so much for sticking to the end!! :D
wow i finished this in one shot >.< it was nice <3 i love this type of fic, no suspense and happy ending i still cant get over that inoo has to send money to his mother so much >.> oh well
Wow thank you so much for reading~!! ^^ Thankyous :3 haha this is my first try at writing fanfic so wasn't really sure how it'd turn out! XD yays! ^^ me too, i hope to continue writing happy endings, i like how they make you feel happy to write them! ^^ yeahh kei has unsupportive family here... =____=
“I love you so much I wouldn’t mind losing my cell phone on the bus everyday, just so I could call you and hear your voice, and you would personally return it to me.
“I love you so much I would be willing to come here, dressed as a maid, and work every single weekday and weekend, just so I could get to see you.
“I love you so much I would be willing to get locked into a million dark closets and drenched with freezing water a million times, just so that afterward, you would hold me warmly in your arms and kiss me on the forehead, just to comfort me.
“I love you so much that my heart throbbed when you told me you loved me, and it ripped my heart to pieces to reject you.
just that whole part, made me have every single emotion
*sighs happily* I'm glad...
“But seriously, Kei,” Kota smiled as he just barely pulled away from Kei, their faces remaining mere centimeters apart. “You talk too much.”
awww hahaha romantically cute inoo gets interrupted by yabu~ XDD im glad it made u glad! lol XD thanks for reading~~ :] haha how was the coffee, by the way? ^^
gahhh *cough* oh kota~ XDD haha ur welcome! :] it brings happiness (starts humming arashi XD) for me~ ^^ aw thats unfortunate.. >.< hahaa oh wells~ XD i havent had coffee in a long time actually... xDDD more tea lately? ^^;;
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Yay! Kota and Kei ended up together! (And Yuto was TOO hurt in the process! Added bonus!)
You write romance well~
I wish I could do the same, but I think I'm only cut out for the violent stuff! XD
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haha do you mean he "wasn't"? XD lol yay Yuto gets a happy ending too! ^^ (thats what i meant by everything ending a really "perfectly" XD)
thanks! :) this is actually like my first successful romance tho... LOL they usually always fail or are stopped before I reach the end.. -____-;; haha I think you'd be good at it, your writing is AWESOME! but either way thats ok, we all have our strong points! ^^
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Yeah, I meant "wasn't"! Stupid typos! XD
It would be interesting to try to write a romance, but I think I'll stick to Oretachi no Kizuna and the mystery one for now...Maybe afterwards? X___X
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yays for oretachi! :) hows the mystery idea coming?
I think I abandoned my depressing fic.. and now im back on my music idea~ ^^ haha hopefully it'll work out! XD
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yahh yuto ends up all heartbroken *dies* nooo!! i promise to make him less saddening in my next fic! ^^
haha you're reading it already?? XD thats so awesome! ^^
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yayays for happy ending after the angst! XDD
i hope you enjoyed reading~ ^^ thank you so much for sticking to the end!! :D
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good night! it's already 0:40 am here ^^/
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thanks again for reading~
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it was nice <3
i love this type of fic, no suspense and happy ending
i still cant get over that inoo has to send money to his mother so much >.>
oh well
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Thankyous :3 haha this is my first try at writing fanfic so wasn't really sure how it'd turn out! XD
yays! ^^ me too, i hope to continue writing happy endings, i like how they make you feel happy to write them! ^^
yeahh kei has unsupportive family here... =____=
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“I love you, Kota Yabu.
“I love you so much I wouldn’t mind losing my cell phone on the bus everyday, just so I could call you and hear your voice, and you would personally return it to me.
“I love you so much I would be willing to come here, dressed as a maid, and work every single weekday and weekend, just so I could get to see you.
“I love you so much I would be willing to get locked into a million dark closets and drenched with freezing water a million times, just so that afterward, you would hold me warmly in your arms and kiss me on the forehead, just to comfort me.
“I love you so much that my heart throbbed when you told me you loved me, and it ripped my heart to pieces to reject you.
just that whole part, made me have every single emotion
*sighs happily* I'm glad...
“But seriously, Kei,” Kota smiled as he just barely pulled away from Kei, their faces remaining mere centimeters apart. “You talk too much.”
xDDD way to ruin the cute moment YABU!
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im glad it made u glad! lol XD
thanks for reading~~ :]
haha how was the coffee, by the way? ^^
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yay! because...well...i don't know xD
thank you for writing!
and the coffee was yucky xD the creamer tastes weird >.
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haha ur welcome! :] it brings happiness (starts humming arashi XD) for me~ ^^
aw thats unfortunate.. >.< hahaa oh wells~ XD i havent had coffee in a long time actually... xDDD more tea lately? ^^;;
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