Untitled (I suck at poetry ^^")

[ayamekofuku]

A river of cherry petals are drowning me

In your warm embrace

I seem to forget what and why

Because you are the reason for which I cry

I let out a sight, as you kiss me once more

The old, happy fairytale which transformed

The endless dream which I had

Here I stand now, regretting my words so bad

And I walk, talking to the wind

An

Comments

[freysan]

whaaaa~!!!!!!!

you don't suck at poetry... no, certainly not... i was surprised (and became sad) with the ending... i never saw that...

and did you, by any chance, get the inspiration form "cassis"? or did it heighten on emotion in making this..?

really great~!!!
huggles~!!!

[ayamekofuku]

aww, thank you so mu~ch *hugs tight until there's no air left* oups...
i don't know what happened, there was "cassis" playing in my head, but, shame on me, i never read the translated lyrics, hehe *hits head on desk*

[freysan]

oh, you didn't..? haha, it must be coincidence, then... or destiny..?

it's not really a big deal... there's just this rumor that cassis was for somebody's girlfriend who had died... but it's just a rumor... it's a sad song, too, though...

[ayamekofuku]

actually, that happened to me a couple of years ago, but...it's for him.

[freysan]

eh...? seriously..?
i'm sorry for bringing that up... i guess this is also for him..?

sorry... *hugs you tight*

[ayamekofuku]

yeah...it's ok, i've been able to smile again thanks to my friends, and the truth is i started writing because of him.this is, indeed, a dedication to him.
it's ok *hugs back and gives cookie*^^

[freysan]

it's good to hear... *hugs you again*
you have really nice friends... (^.^)