[fic] LOVE SPY

Feb 10, 2010 20:33



[to be continued]

A/N: hmmm... i've noticed that not all OC's are commenting ne? you know who you are, i don't want to mention your names but if i have no choice i will...>_<, anyways, will it work? let's find out on the next chapter...:D

COMMENTS PLEASE!!!!

multi-chaptered, oc-fic, fic: love spy

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kodochalover February 23 2010, 17:59:20 UTC
UWAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH FINALLY SAYURI AND YUTO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YESS!!!! I hope it works out :D!!

"WHY ON EARTH YOU LET JUN GO!?" Aya asked Rui.

"Cause he's good and he's very capable," Rui answered.

"But... I LIKE HIM!!! Because he's good and capable!"

lol they make it sound like he's a dog xD!!
or some other type of pet lol BUT Aya you already have a squirrel ♥

"Oh, since he trespassed and hurt someone, he'll be jailed because of it"

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its about damn time lol

"Oneechan!!!" her two 7-year-old brothers ran to her and embraced her.

"I missed you so much," Atsuko embraced her brothers as well, "how have you been,"

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how freakin sweet and adorable!! if i was there witnessing this, id cry like crazy lol
and one of the boys name is Akito ^^ I LOVE THAT NAME xD especially because its the name of the main character in one of my favorite animes xD "Kodocha"~ ^^

Aya smiled more, "Kawaii," she ruffled Akira's hair and said, "you have lots more oneechans to kiss,"

how freakin adorable!! awwwww and they're gonna be called oneechans xD kyaa! im an oneechan to them too xD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KYAAA I sound like a pedophile lol

"Y-you think so?" Sayuri held Yuto's hands and looked at his eyes.

you'll be Yuto's wife ;D
yay! how cute ^^ I thought there would be like a sudden confession here or something lol

"Ne, since Yuto's pretty protective over Sayuri-san, why not use it?" Inoo suggested.

im super curious now xD!~!
I cant wait~
I have an idea of what they will do lol
well i have to wait till i read lol

I sat down beside him, not thinking he'd see.
Once I was settled, his eyes were on me.
Piercing my soul, my heart and my brain.
I was totally speachless, I could not meet his gaze.

My heart started racing, was he just playing games?
His eyes were so warm, they took my breath away.
As the minutes ticked by, I wanted him more.
I still couldn't look up, my eyes locked on the floor ...

oh gawd this reminds me of a crush of mine D:
I love the last paragraph the most and the last sentence... I really do :D!!!!

thank you!!!
and once again sorry for commenting so late T^T
GOMENACHAI!!!!

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